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Islands...
Islands in the sea ,I've lost you all behind me.The ignorance of values in ones taste ,once you've kissed the filth in this human race.On and on with the way to do the bit, to all the doubters who said prove it. How many times alone in the world because no one cares, head looking down you know the junky stare. Drifting along with no one at the wheel ,all ways numb never feel. Ever drown yourself dieing in your mind, letting it all go in reckless define. Why do I dare if no one else cares?, their bullshit ways ,the butt fuck stares. I'm inside me in control standing there, so I stomp on you fuckers like lamb ,sheep stairs. I feed me ,I fuck me ,I stuff money up my ass ,laughing at you sheep following along now mow your grass. Sailing like a pirate each day a different island for me, me,me,all the golden riches on the sea of free. Hate let's me ignore you it helps keep me here ,better than the hall way a rope with a chair.you follow along bow at their feet ,enjoy another starvation day a mental nothing to eat. I cant help you swim ,I'll watch the clown drown . I'm the kudatah out here in my own bloody crown . Slowly going under whispers of the ocean the only sound.
Published 5th Jul 2019
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25th Nov 2019 8:14pm
Great writing, p1w2t3! Very descriptive, with great visual imagery :)
Kind of silly at some points, although I'm not sure if this was intentional or not :P
Kind of silly at some points, although I'm not sure if this was intentional or not :P
1st Jan 2020 10:31pm
My only suggestion would be to format the poem in a way that makes it easier to read, such as:
“Islands in the sea, I've lost you all behind me.
The ignorance of values in one’s taste,
once you've kissed the filth in this human race.
On and on with the way to do the bit,
to all the doubters who said prove it.
How many times alone in the world because no one cares,
Head looking down you know the junky stare.
Drifting along with no one at the wheel,
all ways numb, never feel.
Ever drown yourself dying in your mind,
Letting it all go in reckless define.
Why do I dare, if no one else cares?
Their bullshit ways, the butt fuck stares.
I'm inside me, in control standing there,
so I stomp on you fuckers like lamb, sheep stairs.
I feed me, I fuck me, I stuff money up my ass,
Laughing at you sheep following along now mow your grass.
Sailing like a pirate each day a different island - for me, me, me,
All the golden riches on the sea of free.
Hate lets me ignore you; it helps keep me here,
better than the hallway: a rope with a chair.
You follow along bow at their feet,
enjoy another starvation day a mental nothing to eat.
I can’t help you swim, I'll watch the clown drown .
I'm the kudatah out here in my own bloody crown .
Slowly going under whispers of the ocean the only sound.”
“Islands in the sea, I've lost you all behind me.
The ignorance of values in one’s taste,
once you've kissed the filth in this human race.
On and on with the way to do the bit,
to all the doubters who said prove it.
How many times alone in the world because no one cares,
Head looking down you know the junky stare.
Drifting along with no one at the wheel,
all ways numb, never feel.
Ever drown yourself dying in your mind,
Letting it all go in reckless define.
Why do I dare, if no one else cares?
Their bullshit ways, the butt fuck stares.
I'm inside me, in control standing there,
so I stomp on you fuckers like lamb, sheep stairs.
I feed me, I fuck me, I stuff money up my ass,
Laughing at you sheep following along now mow your grass.
Sailing like a pirate each day a different island - for me, me, me,
All the golden riches on the sea of free.
Hate lets me ignore you; it helps keep me here,
better than the hallway: a rope with a chair.
You follow along bow at their feet,
enjoy another starvation day a mental nothing to eat.
I can’t help you swim, I'll watch the clown drown .
I'm the kudatah out here in my own bloody crown .
Slowly going under whispers of the ocean the only sound.”
13th Jan 2020 00:39am
