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I Miss The Old You
I don’t miss you in the way
— that I need you back
I just miss who you said you were
— all the qualities you lack
You’re still on my mind
— but it’s not really true
I just miss a false memory
Maybe I miss the old you
— that I need you back
I just miss who you said you were
— all the qualities you lack
You’re still on my mind
— but it’s not really true
I just miss a false memory
Maybe I miss the old you
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Re: Re. I Miss The Old You
14th Jun 2019 7:57pm
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14th Jun 2019 7:54pm
This is really good. I can relate to it. Simple yet strong!
Though maybe in this part
"all the qualities you lack"
You can maybe put it this way
"all the qualities you now lack"
Just a suggestion :)
Though maybe in this part
"all the qualities you lack"
You can maybe put it this way
"all the qualities you now lack"
Just a suggestion :)
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Re: Re. I Miss The Old You
14th Jun 2019 7:57pm
Ooh I do like that better, but he always lacked them😂 It was a quick write. Thank you for the read and the comment, as well as the suggestion❤️
Re: Re. I Miss The Old You
14th Jun 2019 8:00pm
Hahaha too bad he always lacked some qualities 🤣 Quick write but brilliant for sure! No worties! Always gotta appreciate a good piece of work 🙌
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2019 8:10pm
It's deflating when we discover what we thought was real was just a facade, isn't it? It's a legit thing...missing what you THOUGHT someone was, or what they led you to believe they were. A person has to have a really good crap detector to avoid that. Solid write here :-) ~Willow~
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14th Jun 2019 8:13pm
Yes! That’s exactly what this write was. A “fuck, I’ve been fooled.”
Thank you Willow, for the read and the comment❤️
Thank you Willow, for the read and the comment❤️
Re. I Miss The Old You
14th Jun 2019 8:13pm
"You’re still on my mind
— but it’s not really true
I just miss a false memory"
powerful beautiful Liv...
love Brenda 💕
— but it’s not really true
I just miss a false memory"
powerful beautiful Liv...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. I Miss The Old You
14th Jun 2019 8:14pm
Ah, thank you, sweet Brenda, for the read and the comment, and the unrelenting support🥰
Re. I Miss The Old You
People change, Liv. Sometimes not for the better ( from our perception, anyway) . This is something every reader can relate to. I particularly enjoyed your form.
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14th Jun 2019 8:28pm
Yes, they do. I think it’s easier to believe that than that you’re blinded to what they’ve always been. Thank you, Ahavati, for the read and comment❤️
Re: Re. I Miss The Old You
14th Jun 2019 8:30pm
You're welcome, Liv. If people are blinded, it's typically because they want to be. Sometimes it's the only way we learn.
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Re. I Miss The Old You
15th Jun 2019 00:09am
Upon a reflection of our past relationships,
we often do miss the person we met back then.
Sometimes both change for the better and miss that connection
but no guarantee that 2 are still compatible. Some of us just are not meant to be together
OK to remember and miss that but also a good peek to help with the next encounter
with another in Your soul group
we often do miss the person we met back then.
Sometimes both change for the better and miss that connection
but no guarantee that 2 are still compatible. Some of us just are not meant to be together
OK to remember and miss that but also a good peek to help with the next encounter
with another in Your soul group
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Re: Re. I Miss The Old You
15th Jun 2019 00:35am
Truer words have never been spoken, Tallen. Thank you for the read and kind comment❤️
Re. I Miss The Old You
I like this one cos it sounds like you appreciated this dude when he was a loser but I guess he got smart, huh?
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29th Jun 2019 3:50am
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29th Jun 2019 3:51am
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Oh I'm sorry & that's actually not very funny at all. It sounds like a sad loss on one hand but on the other, you may have saved yourself a whole load of grief. as I'm sure you know.
You can only help those who are willing to help themselves! :-)
You can only help those who are willing to help themselves! :-)
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29th Jun 2019 3:57am
No, it was your initial comment that cracked me up. His reality isn't funny no, but. I couldn't help but laugh at the "He got smart, huh?"
And yes, I do believe it saved me a lot of grief in the end.
And yes, I do believe it saved me a lot of grief in the end.
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