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June Thunder
the smell of thunder
or hoofbeats
the thump
the thump the thump
it was hard to tell them
apart
an unpredicted spooning
O moonstone month
stop
will you just stop
June whispered
‘you’ll never forget me’
then spit up a pearl
and rose petals
flew everywhere
as she shook her head
or hoofbeats
the thump
the thump the thump
it was hard to tell them
apart
an unpredicted spooning
O moonstone month
stop
will you just stop
June whispered
‘you’ll never forget me’
then spit up a pearl
and rose petals
flew everywhere
as she shook her head
Published 14th Jun 2019
| Edited 24th May 2020
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never could resist a dare
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14th Jun 2019 5:35am
“June whispered
‘you’ll never forget me’
then spit up a pearl
and rose petals
flew everywhere
as she shook her head...”
This, is absolutely lovely... and the last stanza was my favourite !
A gorgeous write, Zorba ! 😎
‘you’ll never forget me’
then spit up a pearl
and rose petals
flew everywhere
as she shook her head...”
This, is absolutely lovely... and the last stanza was my favourite !
A gorgeous write, Zorba ! 😎
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