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willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
Your swagger arouses
my sexuality espouses
your sacrificial dagger
brings out my weak-knee little girl
I'm known as the devil
red lady in black
commanded back
with a whisper—or song
You get to the heart of me...my innocence
Lusting the whore
seeking the virgin
territories of my mind merging
what version of me do you require?
to sate your desire: a need to dominate
I fulminate against your complete control
over my very essence
You beat back the whore
wield your will like a sword
cannot be ignored
—or disobeyed
You come into my divinity
entering my sacred pools
Your place of reverence
my lost remembrance
I
remember
you
Our souls undressed, I shake
like the first time
A lakeside reflection
Be gentle now
I sip your phallacy
like a babe at the breast
no rest for wicked tongues
gentle child of the dawn rides
fully realized in your arms
crafted by your hands
in your indomitable vision—
a woman now
Author's Note
thank you for creating with me dearest HF you really sculpted the write and brought it together usually I'm the one that does that I love how you take control ❤
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Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 8:29pm
Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 8:31pm
thank you graciously from us both beautiful Liv he is a joy to write with he has such a commanding presence...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 8:32pm
Well something turned out very right, whatever happened ;) great ink, you two!
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 8:35pm
I have to confess he makes it so easy I usually do the editing with most collaboration but not all I just sent my ideas and he took care of merging the two thoughts... I'm in awe of him...
I deeply appreciate you beautiful Liv...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you beautiful Liv...
love Brenda 💕
Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 9:13pm
You two put together a very hot piece... great duo in collab indeed! :D
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 9:15pm
thank you graciously dearest Magic with this mine is nothing but raw talent while he the mastermind...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
Anonymous
8th Jun 2019 9:23pm
😱🔥😳🥴
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 9:27pm
thank you graciously dearest Ragnar for the love on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
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8th Jun 2019 10:14pm
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 10:24pm
giggles thank you beautiful Sky from us both I deeply appreciate your love and your comment gave me giggles...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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8th Jun 2019 10:50pm
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Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 10:42pm
You two should be so ashamed of yourselves. 😠
If you weren't so damn good together!💏
If you weren't so damn good together!💏
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 10:54pm
lol dearest Snuggle from us both you gifted me smiles with your comment he is a real pleasure to write with....I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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8th Jun 2019 10:48pm
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 10:55pm
and I love it you tame my demons got them filing taxes cause they work for you now lol 😈
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 11:25pm
it was a line I thought of when coming up with lines for us under Raven 😈
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Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 10:53pm
Whoever ultimately takes control, this is a wonderful write. The title alone suggests a balance of power, a submission without heated conflict, but joy. Love this!
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
8th Jun 2019 10:56pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas from us both for the love on this write... he picked the title I thought it was perfect...I deeply appreciate you my friend...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
9th Jun 2019 5:39pm
Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
9th Jun 2019 5:37pm
A collab that is absolutey sexy as fuck. You two play so well together, another plus of HF joining the family! Love ya bunches 💜
Got your demons paying taxes😂
Got your demons paying taxes😂
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Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
9th Jun 2019 5:41pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora giggles at my demons paying taxes that was a line I was playing with in one of my writes I think I will incorporate somewhere... I deeply appreciate you lady...
love you...
Brenda 🌹
love you...
Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. willful submission~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
9th Jun 2019 5:50pm
I look forward to that one...I'd love to see such humor rolling from your ink!!
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9th Jun 2019 5:51pm