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Perfectly flawed
She emotes as a purple scarlet soul dream
Carmine screen over her deep red seams
Chrysanthemum spirit deriving the light
Iron garnet of altruism flowered night,
Witty and headstrong with a joy to live
Poetically reflective but gentle tranquil
Hence showing creative liberation in love
A gentlewoman inquisitive water sign dove.
Published 6th Jun 2019
Author's Note
An earthy female sent from up above...
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6th Jun 2019 6:04pm
6th Jun 2019 6:08pm
We all find the beautiful marks of imperfection...being the things we admire as real...thank you, dearest...so glad you liked the poem...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Anonymous
6th Jun 2019 7:58pm
ohhhhh this made me sigh a little
best wishes and much love to you both
best wishes and much love to you both
6th Jun 2019 8:06pm
Thank you dearest...much love to you as well...such a sensitive, intense spirit, you have...the profound verses you write, draw such other world inspiration...I love to walk in them....
Love always
Jeff
Love always
Jeff
7th Jun 2019 10:47am
"Perfectly flawed" speaks to me of a sense of unconditional acceptance - really nice.
8th Jun 2019 1:56am
Perhaps that kind of love is the best...or maybe not...but it does feel free to love like the wind...
I really appreciate the read,
Jeff
I really appreciate the read,
Jeff
Anonymous
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7th Jun 2019 3:24pm
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8th Jun 2019 2:04am
You so often see the duality in verses...it comes from the same place as the equal sign in the middle of an equation...a constant...the polarities are balanced and maintained by the center absolute...
thanks so much for your thoughts,
Jeff
thanks so much for your thoughts,
Jeff
10th Jun 2019 11:44pm
11th Jun 2019 00:15am
She is my dream girl manifested...a total sweetheart with a lusty soul...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
13th Jun 2019 10:04pm
Your picture goes hand in hand with the beautiful description you gave us. You used strong verse to imagine her exquisitely. Thank you so much for your entry, it's most beautiful!
