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close you eyes
hush....
close you eyes.
relax...
feel my hands.
feel my bed of roses.
hear the water rushing.
hold me tight.
feel me heart.
hear my words.
see my passion.
come,
lets us become one.
let our bodies twist,
and turn into one.
i can feel you.
the total bliss.
our worlds brighten,
our worlds become one.
you and I
we are now one.
right?
close you eyes.
relax...
feel my hands.
feel my bed of roses.
hear the water rushing.
hold me tight.
feel me heart.
hear my words.
see my passion.
come,
lets us become one.
let our bodies twist,
and turn into one.
i can feel you.
the total bliss.
our worlds brighten,
our worlds become one.
you and I
we are now one.
right?
Published 6th Dec 2011
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6th Dec 2011 10:34pm
Anonymous
6th Dec 2011 10:52pm
emo1,
As I read through this one it was kind of stand-off-ish; too mechanical. But then when you ended it with the question...that tied the whole thing together! Great job.
tornado
As I read through this one it was kind of stand-off-ish; too mechanical. But then when you ended it with the question...that tied the whole thing together! Great job.
tornado
