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Wet moon
An arcane breath to breath
With hand in hand mystic steps
Gazing on a luna nebulous,
Inhaling this hidden night
So exhaling our enigma lights
Now walk within the mist,
Deep suspended ludic rain
Sibylline feeling now remains
Together we kiss as one.
Published 4th Jun 2019
| Edited 5th Jun 2019
Author's Note
A touch of my moon...she lights my sun
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
4th Jun 2019 8:27pm
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4th Jun 2019 9:08pm
You understand such, so very well...my mystical love poem writer...such praise from you is uplifting...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
4th Jun 2019 8:41pm
4th Jun 2019 9:09pm
She completes me...thank you so very much for the read, my friend...
Jeff
Jeff
4th Jun 2019 10:23pm
for me, there's a depth of beauty in your writing from which I could learn a lot.
blows me away.
blows me away.
4th Jun 2019 10:36pm
Blessed to have a beautiful woman and a beautiful world and beautiful poets surrounding me...thank you very much for the humbling comment... I really appreciate the read...
Jeff
Jeff
6th Jun 2019 7:19pm
You have this fascinating way to touch the spirit with your words. It is lovely to read the joy of connectivity.
6th Jun 2019 7:26pm
Such a sweet comment....you feel those poems because of your lovely heart...thank you so much, girly
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff
7th Jun 2019 9:03am
I love watching the moon with someone I love.. gazing together in the moon night.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
8th Jun 2019 2:49am
9th Jun 2019 11:37pm
Oh my tender poet ... this one is ... breathtaking ... love the structure ... the flow ... the serenity of it ... all ...
10th Jun 2019 1:12am
