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Underneath A Dark Poet Facade
He steals my breath
as I get high off his vibes
A bright yellow energy teasing my senses
The wind shifted
So we left the sun buried
& danced in the rays of melting snow
Inside I had found myself burning
Building metaphorical forts in my heart
because there was always
only
him
as I get high off his vibes
A bright yellow energy teasing my senses
The wind shifted
So we left the sun buried
& danced in the rays of melting snow
Inside I had found myself burning
Building metaphorical forts in my heart
because there was always
only
him
Published 5th Jan 2010
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5th Jan 2010 11:23am
... your mood shift has done nothing to detract from your own unique and compelling style, Kandice. I would like to see you coax a longer piece from the warm desert breeze which you find so inspiring. Can't wait!
7th Jan 2010 10:22pm
I really dig this one.. very simple and short but completely effective explanation of what you want to get across and where you were in your mind when you wrote it.. I like the details and descriptive words like the first paragraph.. very cool.. keep it up!! cheers hun!!
