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I love me some rhymin'
[Hold my cup of coffee while I type this...careful, it's hot...use the handle]
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Love all "this underground" wordsmith
Temple tower of sight and sound
Man, ya gotta love all that dark inside
Joke foreground such fool's round.
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Blowing fire while abstruse wandering adjacent yon stargate
Assign all seams this vortex ring that nevermore degenerate
Creating this new round, the kind that spins a perpetual day.
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No essence gather
No ashes spent
One split in nether
One heaven sent.
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Syncopate to undulate then have to saturate and stimulate
Bringing that relax of vertebrates while letting mind situate
Do not fret a clock, you can blame the watch if it shows late.
Author's Note
Walking in the fire pit with gasoline drawers on procrastinate...
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Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 7:50am
Favourite line, for rhyme:
Syncopate to undulate then have to saturate and stimulate
Bringing that relax of vertebrates while letting mind situate
Syncopate to undulate then have to saturate and stimulate
Bringing that relax of vertebrates while letting mind situate
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Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 7:54am
Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 2:49pm
"Do not fret a clock,"
... that's a great phrase - clocks prove nothing about time - only prove that cogs can turn.
... that's a great phrase - clocks prove nothing about time - only prove that cogs can turn.
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Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 3:46pm
Yes, the concept of time is much like a pillow...something to rest your mind upon...
Thank you very much for the read... I appreciate it
Jeff
Thank you very much for the read... I appreciate it
Jeff
Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 7:22pm
Sharp ink, syncopation resounds with a percussionists. NICE!! Great job RMT!
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
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Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 7:33pm
Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 8:29pm
Much love back at cha my sweet friend...
I have way too much fun rhyming...
Jeff
I have way too much fun rhyming...
Jeff
Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 8:30pm
you know it's funny I don't usually like rhyme but you do it with so much skill I'm deeply impressed you didn't miss a beat ❤
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Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
Not sure why I tend to rhyme.... sometimes it just works with the beat...most everything I write is to a drum beat in my head...I really appreciate you, my dearest Crims...
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff
Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 11:10pm
I love this ink Jeff...the image and opening lines reminded me of Leonard Cohen's wonderful song, Tower of Song.
Excellent poem man.
Cheers...Harry
Excellent poem man.
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
2nd Jun 2019 11:46pm
Ah man...Cohen was fantastic in multiple ways...That is Tesla's tower...that little known profound genius that created the 20th century...suppressed in history because he was too good in multiple ways...
I really appreciate the read, brother
Jeff
I really appreciate the read, brother
Jeff
Re. I love me some rhymin'
6th Jun 2019 3:52am
My mind is spinning so much almost... against this clock?
But then twisting with the clock...
Jeff you got the rhyming in the bag for sure..!
Only the poet has the better grasp of a poem's origin...
And some spill that they themselves don't even understand with words just slapped on lol
cool ink..!
Love
H
But then twisting with the clock...
Jeff you got the rhyming in the bag for sure..!
Only the poet has the better grasp of a poem's origin...
And some spill that they themselves don't even understand with words just slapped on lol
cool ink..!
Love
H
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Re: Re. I love me some rhymin'
6th Jun 2019 4:33am
Thank you Hanuel, my dear...I bought the rhyming bag at a fire sale...maybe why my riffs are smokey flavored...:)
love always
Jeff
love always
Jeff