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Is It Cheaper To Keep Her?
Is it cheaper to keep her
when the writing's on the wall?
no text, no call
more than the start
closer to the fall
the spring has lost a step
and the battery has run
down, down
drained of it's heart
and of it's hope
one more minute please
just let me see
where your juices set me free
no ties
no tears
time to cut the cord
after all these years
when the writing's on the wall?
no text, no call
more than the start
closer to the fall
the spring has lost a step
and the battery has run
down, down
drained of it's heart
and of it's hope
one more minute please
just let me see
where your juices set me free
no ties
no tears
time to cut the cord
after all these years
Published 31st May 2019
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31st May 2019 8:08pm
31st May 2019 8:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
31st May 2019 10:01pm
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31st May 2019 10:59pm
Was talking to a friend the other night about that exact point but it has double meaning as my phone won't hold a charge and I need to get a new one.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
31st May 2019 11:02pm
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31st May 2019 11:44pm
1st Jun 2019 00:27am
Anonymous
1st Jun 2019 00:04am
You, I have decided, are a master at layers & subtleties...
I nursed a phone with battery issues along stubbornly until it tried to electrocute me. Made me think of those days
I nursed a phone with battery issues along stubbornly until it tried to electrocute me. Made me think of those days
1st Jun 2019 00:28am
Damn.
You're really asking the question...
read your comment on that comment!
The double meaning connected with kind of the ache...
Nicely done and lots of respect
H
You're really asking the question...
read your comment on that comment!
The double meaning connected with kind of the ache...
Nicely done and lots of respect
H
5th Jun 2019 10:13pm
