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Meant To Be
It comes in a post,
porched,
surrounded,
a concrete manifestation
of congeal
abridged, I must oblige
not your ordinary tongues,
tied
amazed, adorned,
dazzled under corner lights
beheld when darkness
bites
knees bent, I lean
in amidst the smoke,
the haze of heat
hovering deserted,
empty, streets
inhaling,
all that was meant to be
porched,
surrounded,
a concrete manifestation
of congeal
abridged, I must oblige
not your ordinary tongues,
tied
amazed, adorned,
dazzled under corner lights
beheld when darkness
bites
knees bent, I lean
in amidst the smoke,
the haze of heat
hovering deserted,
empty, streets
inhaling,
all that was meant to be
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Re. Meant To Be
2nd Jun 2019 6:12pm
dearest Tim your poems always drip passion
this one does too intense...
love Brenda 💕
this one does too intense...
love Brenda 💕
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Re. Meant To Be
You are always thought provoking Tim. First the imagery of your words then the imagery of our minds. This makes me nostalgic and a little haunted by ghosts of yesterday. You are one of my favorite poets because of the depth of your ink!
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
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Re. Meant To Be
2nd Jun 2019 11:21pm
Now I'm putting this on top of your poetry brilliance Tim...loved it.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2019 2:48pm
I think my brain is soggy this morning. And your layers are intriguing here. Gonna have to revisit this one a time or two after coffee. I like the feel of it though!
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
4th Jun 2019 1:53am
Re. Meant To Be
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2019 6:57pm
i have no idea why this made me think ov stalking & obsession
but that's where my mind went 🤣 I may need to see someone about that...
but i digress
... this is gorgeously dark & rich in imagery, Tim
i must keep it close
xo
but that's where my mind went 🤣 I may need to see someone about that...
but i digress
... this is gorgeously dark & rich in imagery, Tim
i must keep it close
xo
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
4th Jun 2019 1:54am
Re. Meant To Be
3rd Jun 2019 9:07pm
Wow this is a good write
abridged, I must oblige
not your ordinary tongues,
tied
Perfect lines
abridged, I must oblige
not your ordinary tongues,
tied
Perfect lines
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