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Drawing Inspiration
Get a pencil my friend
sketch my words
read them as they curve
they're yours to lend
into mental swirls
do they strike a nerve
all short words can bend
if you draw them observe
how they apprehend
a mind can stray to swerve
between depicted pen
two meanings you learn
in one line that's only read
a single verse
an implosion through the head
if you get the burst
all paper should be fed
with the letters that nurse
the pen who has just bled .
Drawing inspiration
a law in all creation
artistic imagery
articulation , swinging free
words draw lines , trigonometry
we translate the signs
to what we read
this fills the mind
eyes do receive
pictoral lines
in poetry .
sketch my words
read them as they curve
they're yours to lend
into mental swirls
do they strike a nerve
all short words can bend
if you draw them observe
how they apprehend
a mind can stray to swerve
between depicted pen
two meanings you learn
in one line that's only read
a single verse
an implosion through the head
if you get the burst
all paper should be fed
with the letters that nurse
the pen who has just bled .
Drawing inspiration
a law in all creation
artistic imagery
articulation , swinging free
words draw lines , trigonometry
we translate the signs
to what we read
this fills the mind
eyes do receive
pictoral lines
in poetry .
Written by
diddi
(StephenPaul Summerscales)
Published 5th Dec 2011
| Edited 7th Dec 2011
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Typo D:
6th Dec 2011 9:02pm
I like this :D I think it would be fantastic if read aloud, slam-poetry style.
ONe thing though - it's "trigonometry" ;)
ONe thing though - it's "trigonometry" ;)
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re: Typo D:
6th Dec 2011 10:00pm
So there is ha ha ha thanks for noticing that I'm quite shocked I made a mistake like that .
"artistic imagery"
6th Dec 2011 9:25pm
Its nice when a poem can not only touches you but take you on a journey far and in between.
The title is a true composition of the entire piece.
The title is a true composition of the entire piece.
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re: "artistic imagery"
6th Dec 2011 10:04pm
wow
6th Dec 2011 11:53pm
re: wow
7th Dec 2011 00:51am
Inspiration
7th Dec 2011 4:11am
re: Inspiration
7th Dec 2011 9:53am
~
7th Dec 2011 6:00am
This was an excellent poem to read. It made me feel a little emotional.
Another thing. It`s Apprehend.
Another thing. It`s Apprehend.
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re: ~
7th Dec 2011 9:59am
It's always good when a verse strikes some emotion , so I am happy you got that from it and yes I know your right about the typo ha ha I'm always correcting others and here I am , the living hypocrite , thanks unleashed for your comment .:)
re: re: ~
8th Dec 2011 3:30am
Heh..
I wouldn't call correcting someone's work when he or she has corrected you hipocracy.
Any time.
I wouldn't call correcting someone's work when he or she has corrected you hipocracy.
Any time.
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Good read
10th Dec 2011 1:58pm
re: Good read
10th Dec 2011 2:29pm