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lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
my spirit tattoed and lonely
tattooed with the feel of you...the stain of your flesh
you marked me irretrievably broken and yours
beneath the whiskey moon
broke the way only a woman who's been loved hard knows
broken souls require tether, sweetheart...my mark is my brand
you need rules to break and punishment for breaking ‘em
I provide both and sometimes it hurts
bits of your bone and soul unify with mine
my body cries mutiny it's no longer under my control
I know I will never be the same
beneath my pale skin where you store all your secrets...I'm yours
Your body needed command and I took the helm
what good are secrets if I can’t exhale them into your mouth
you don't know it yet but you won't ever love another no, not like me
I stole a piece of you when you entered to worship at my shrine
I covet the very breath of you--
as it escapes your body in groans and whispers
while you bury your sin deep inside me
there will never be another love who’ll tame the dark like me
beating it back with my alcoholic prayers
giving you access to the gods...my body your exalted grounds
I’ve made many sacrifices on the altar of whiskey and shame
when you pray, make sure you’re on your knees
you have a body made for sin; I just oblige
lovers love, cheaters cheat—our thing can’t be defined
tattoed by your soul and you're mine
the divinity of our lust is played out in the flesh
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Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 3:46pm
Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 3:51pm
thank you graciously dearest Snuggle from us both giggles...he is a pleasure to write with...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 3:50pm
Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 3:52pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Tallen for the beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 3:51pm
Very well composed with two different but likeminded voices! Nice job, guys.
This is smokin! 👌
Delanee.
This is smokin! 👌
Delanee.
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 3:53pm
thank you graciously beautiful Delanee from us both for the love on this comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
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26th May 2019 3:59pm
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 4:10pm
thank you graciously beautiful Sky from us both yes he really brought the heat with his lines...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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26th May 2019 4:25pm
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 4:37pm
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 11:20pm
The flames are burning high and hard in this powerful poem Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
26th May 2019 11:22pm
thank you graciously Harry from us both he was a pleasure to write with...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 3:11am
Damn good collab you guys! Very sexy
Love the last two stanzas best....
"there will never be another love who’ll tame the dark like me
beating it back with my alcoholic prayers
giving you access to the gods...my body your exalted grounds
I’ve made many sacrifices on the altar of whiskey and shame
when you pray, make sure you’re on your knees
you have a body made for sin; I just oblige
lovers love, cheaters cheat—our thing can’t be defined " 🤩
Love the last two stanzas best....
"there will never be another love who’ll tame the dark like me
beating it back with my alcoholic prayers
giving you access to the gods...my body your exalted grounds
I’ve made many sacrifices on the altar of whiskey and shame
when you pray, make sure you’re on your knees
you have a body made for sin; I just oblige
lovers love, cheaters cheat—our thing can’t be defined " 🤩
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 9:36pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora from us both for the love on this write... I deeply appreciate you, lady...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 10:33pm
Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 10:34pm
giggles that would be fun he's a real pleasure to write with and I love his commanding tone 😈
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27th May 2019 3:41am
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 9:37pm
thank you deares HF I love your commanding voice you owned this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 8:28pm
Love the give and take here, Brenda. A wonderful collaboration with a poet clearly much more than functional.
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 9:38pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas from us both it was very enjoyable creating with him...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
Anonymous
27th May 2019 8:34pm
Oh, dear lordy I love this. Brilliant collaboration by two exceptional writers. 🤗
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 9:39pm
giggles thank you graciously beautiful Soulz from us both... I love your response...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 9:48pm
Why do I get the feeling of rosary beads being slapped across my hands by Sister Mary Grace for eyeing up and down the girls coming out of the confessional.
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
29th May 2019 00:39am
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
27th May 2019 9:55pm
"I covet the very breath of you--
as it escapes your body in groans and whispers
while you bury your sin deep inside me'
oh how you inspire such deep passion within me...your words so often conjure the very core of desires...I am a better lover for reading your works these past many moons...you are a flowing river of what is it to be--- woman
love
Jeff
as it escapes your body in groans and whispers
while you bury your sin deep inside me'
oh how you inspire such deep passion within me...your words so often conjure the very core of desires...I am a better lover for reading your works these past many moons...you are a flowing river of what is it to be--- woman
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
29th May 2019 00:40am
thankyou graciously dearest Jeff you make me blush so beautiful is your comment to my heart...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
28th May 2019 4:21pm
Re: Re. lusts of the flesh~with the sexy Highlyfunctional
29th May 2019 00:41am
thank you beautiful one I'm trying to persuade him to do just that right now... I deeply appreciate you lady...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕