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Withering away
As soon as the smile is here it quickly disappears behind a frown,
All these negative thoughts come crashing down on me,
Much like the waves on the sea
I am the rocks that slowly wither away as the water crashes into me
All these negative thoughts come crashing down on me,
Much like the waves on the sea
I am the rocks that slowly wither away as the water crashes into me
Published 25th May 2019
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16th Jun 2019 12:26pm
I liked broken me better but again good write and i cant point out anything to fix.
