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The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
5th Dec 2011 1:26am
I really like this couplet. It's another poem I've read on here today which encourages me to think. It's not an easy poem. It's quietly thoughtful and intelligent. Thanks for the read, Opheliac.
5th Dec 2011 9:39am
im glad it encourages you to think. I should thank you for your feedback Jack
5th Dec 2011 10:15am
The use of 'smaller and smaller' is just perfect over here and exactly to the pace of the subject you wished to draw. This is beautiful!
5th Dec 2011 4:35pm
A tiny bomb
that has thoughts
for sharpels and
afterthoughts for
gun powder.
Bravo.
curtsy,
S'
that has thoughts
for sharpels and
afterthoughts for
gun powder.
Bravo.
curtsy,
S'
5th Dec 2011 9:24pm
6th Dec 2011 1:55am
This is one of the best I've ever read. the shorter the better. That's why I read poetry because the books can be short. Keep up the good work!!! www.writerighton.com
6th Dec 2011 2:04am
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