Realisation

cool poem :)

Excellent. Great observation. Through a single sentence this expresses so much of life's torments and struggles. Nothing more than that I can say really. Thanks for the read, Opheliac.

i should thank you for taking the time to read and comment :)

Apt! That's the expression. I just love the short poem.

nice one!

thank you both very much:)

You are the princess of feelings Ophie...

you're wonderful.
thank you for both :)

Saw this off of a forum and it's lovely. Added to my reading list. :]

thank you dear :)