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Our Song...
Part these waters of rose,
and orchestrate from backstage, as I sweetly sigh in lullabies.
Sing along , to our labored fuck, in a-cappella while waltzing sculpted notes of need into the soul of me.
As you etch your pleasured echoes in my humming veins, compose of this flesh to burst forth a symphony.
Until our swelled crescendo then finds the chorus of us, take me in our every nuanced cadence and key.
[repeat chorus]
Give me one hell of a performance.
and orchestrate from backstage, as I sweetly sigh in lullabies.
Sing along , to our labored fuck, in a-cappella while waltzing sculpted notes of need into the soul of me.
As you etch your pleasured echoes in my humming veins, compose of this flesh to burst forth a symphony.
Until our swelled crescendo then finds the chorus of us, take me in our every nuanced cadence and key.
[repeat chorus]
Give me one hell of a performance.
Published 18th May 2019
| Edited 28th Aug 2020
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Anonymous
18th May 2019 7:45pm
Sing it baby !!!!
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18th May 2019 7:55pm
your deep love as this song one you and he had been played on that loving day
as it as a lot of sentimental feelings within
beautiful
as it as a lot of sentimental feelings within
beautiful
19th May 2019 8:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
18th May 2019 7:57pm
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19th May 2019 8:19pm
Mmmhmm..that's what I said as I licked the pages of my theasuarus...parchment is so old & flesh is overrated;) thank you for blessing me with the add buddy...
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Anonymous
18th May 2019 8:45pm
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19th May 2019 8:21pm
Anonymous
18th May 2019 10:47pm
Lovin’ this, lady! It plucks at strings attached to all corners of my soul...if you only knew the half of it! Take a bow!!!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
19th May 2019 8:24pm
Ever glad to see you grace me with your add & praise. Thank you. I do believe Pandy has been awakened, let's shake this bitch.;) Haha.. xo, sweet woman!
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
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19th May 2019 8:26pm
19th May 2019 4:40am
A breathtaking melody that's felt to the heart and softly heard to the ears
19th May 2019 8:27pm
19th May 2019 6:49am
Beautiful mix of musical metaphors producing a picture of a couple making music in the bedroom. Picture is powerfully symbolic.
19th May 2019 8:28pm
Thank you graciously, Solomon. The picture sent me some good emotions!
20th May 2019 6:34am
Pic certainly got me as well, with its hint of the passionate performance going on.....
20th May 2019 8:06am
19th May 2019 7:39pm
A sexy return to form. That beautiful connection of song and rhythm. Perfect line to end with.
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