Neoteric Canzonet

i know........
i know

too mushy, right?

Sweet and lyrical spill Tallen.

soooooooo, not too "mushy" ?

appreciate the love and praise

LOL - thank You for causing me to laugh

No; definitely NOT too mushy. I just feel funny commenting on a dedicated poem before the one it's dedicated to does!

It's beautiful and real, Tallen.

Em is sleeping and so no way she could comment before You.
I just try to surprise her when she wakes (while i am sleeping) and jumpstart her day.

I really appreciate the share --
thank You

Hmmm, never thought of this as a serenade
thank You for bringing to my awareness
love Your read, here, Beautiful Sister

Where do you get these amazing poem titles from, Tallen? Must be that extra inspiration in your life these days   :))
I think it's a great spill, not too mushy - why not let a 'young' heart speak free, untethered, joyful?

I was telling Em, just the other day that i often write a spill either from the title or the title is a part of the spill
and so the title takes most of the labor for me;
the rest is easy, providing i have a loving muse
of which You know i do.

I am glad it's not too mushy.  I wrote a book years ago called, The Daily Mush.  I've been editing this bk for going on 6 yrs (lol).  & i was thinking of a sequel called, No More Mush, Please!

or maybe i'll use Bender's words and call it
Medium Mush

I love the thought -- untethered joy

Vulnerable. ...daring.... still a man unafraid of love....putting his heart on the line... out in the open....



Much respect...

Always - i can't help myself
this is something i must do

thank You for sharing with me

I sang it to her today before she went to sleep

: )

thank You for the kind praise