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We Write The Story
we are all
the sum of our parents’
mistakes
victories
ungranted wishes
choices
made or unmade
silently influencing
our own
a tiny urging voice
whispering inside our heads
but finally
it’s up to us
to make that final call
the sum of our parents’
mistakes
victories
ungranted wishes
choices
made or unmade
silently influencing
our own
a tiny urging voice
whispering inside our heads
but finally
it’s up to us
to make that final call
Published 15th May 2019
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
15th May 2019 4:28pm
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22nd May 2019 2:13pm
Totally forgot to reply to this. Rude!
I like your take on this, and the paraphrasing. To know where we want to go we sometimes do have to take a closer look at the past.
Thanks again for the love, HF.
I like your take on this, and the paraphrasing. To know where we want to go we sometimes do have to take a closer look at the past.
Thanks again for the love, HF.
22nd May 2019 2:09pm
I like this, and your other pieces I've been reading.
There is a simple, honest quality about them that is powerful.
Pleasure to read them.
There is a simple, honest quality about them that is powerful.
Pleasure to read them.
22nd May 2019 2:12pm
Thank you so much, javalini. :-) I am really pleased to hear you like my terse poetry. I try to make the words as powerful and honest as I can.
This means a lot to me.
Delanee.
This means a lot to me.
Delanee.
