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i can see the sun
sinking, into the pool of your eyes
and i want to bring it back
and make it shine
~
i can see the sun
sinking, into the pool of your eyes
and i want to bring it back
and make it shine
~
Published 15th May 2019
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15th May 2019 4:04am
There are so many ways to take this - but the Universal is separation of a relationship, be it through death or an alternative breakup/separation.
You have a lovely way of capturing the essence of something.
You have a lovely way of capturing the essence of something.
15th May 2019 4:06am
15th May 2019 4:45am
Beware of what you revive. Deep piece, short with many meanings. Could also be a great dark piece
16th May 2019 1:02am
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
15th May 2019 1:11pm
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