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broken
~
soft as the feathers she lost
when her wings were stolen
she lay there, broken
by the man who gave her the wind
~
soft as the feathers she lost
when her wings were stolen
she lay there, broken
by the man who gave her the wind
~
Published 12th May 2019
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12th May 2019 4:41am
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12th May 2019 6:08am
The wings are metaphorical but I absolutely love that it made you think of that. It seems to fit perfectly.
12th May 2019 5:37am
No one can break you like the ones that helped to make you. believe that, tight
12th May 2019 6:09am
12th May 2019 2:59pm
Caused me to reflect on a natural fact.
Eagles often mate on the wing and some suffer unintended consequences.🦅
Eagles often mate on the wing and some suffer unintended consequences.🦅
12th May 2019 4:58pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
14th May 2019 11:02pm
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15th May 2019 1:09am
