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A writers end
It's 1:08 am, I'm at work
With a mind full
A blank paper, and a pen
I'm trying to write
My reasons fail me yet again
Within the dead silence
I grasp for help
Seeing nothing but past mistakes
That Flash on" history misprint
Makes me never want to go down that road again
What to do
Leave it alone, never find solace in writing? That can't be!!
Turn to music perhaps
It has always been my friend!!
From time to time even that helps nothing
The Lyrics adding to my pain
Old songs reminding me of them" bad ole days "
Still nothing good comes to mind
Setting down my pen
Balling up the blank paper, throwing it in the trash bin
Laying my head on my desk
I'll try tomorrow, this cant be my writers end..
With a mind full
A blank paper, and a pen
I'm trying to write
My reasons fail me yet again
Within the dead silence
I grasp for help
Seeing nothing but past mistakes
That Flash on" history misprint
Makes me never want to go down that road again
What to do
Leave it alone, never find solace in writing? That can't be!!
Turn to music perhaps
It has always been my friend!!
From time to time even that helps nothing
The Lyrics adding to my pain
Old songs reminding me of them" bad ole days "
Still nothing good comes to mind
Setting down my pen
Balling up the blank paper, throwing it in the trash bin
Laying my head on my desk
I'll try tomorrow, this cant be my writers end..
Published 3rd Dec 2011
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3rd Dec 2011 5:19pm
this is quite a topic to choose, i like the way you ended it about making a new beginning tomorrow.
3rd Dec 2011 5:21pm
3rd Dec 2011 5:31pm
hey! GG, good to see you back.
i would echo akaran's sentiments.
just a couple of punctuation things i noticed, hope you don't mind.
reason' = missing an s and i don't think you need the '
on"= don't think you need the "
alone = needs a ,
think thats about it. :)
I'ts a good read and draws me into your feelings.Honest and with no 'pity me' lines.
fair play GG
i would echo akaran's sentiments.
just a couple of punctuation things i noticed, hope you don't mind.
reason' = missing an s and i don't think you need the '
on"= don't think you need the "
alone = needs a ,
think thats about it. :)
I'ts a good read and draws me into your feelings.Honest and with no 'pity me' lines.
fair play GG
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10th Aug 2012 5:35am
i can relate to this having that mental block where can't come up with anything or having an idea but yet don't know how to write it down... poems come from the heart and let it flow naturally without you actually thinking
i like this poem :}
i like this poem :}
10th Aug 2012 2:31pm
