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crimsin in retrograde
little pulses of light escape me
dazzling orbs full of power and energry
in sync with the universe, I glow
twirling, expanding, reaching
with the ability to move
I'm in retrograde now
and appear less brilliant
this is the painful bit of my hazy manic state
I burn bright then burn out
a star collapsing in on its self
a black hole pulling everything to it
all consuming with a hunger to fill a void
I need, I need. I need
volatile...a destructive force of nature
imploding taking weaker stars with me
bending time, causing temporal shifts
set into motion by a madman
or so it would seem
until I swirl, dip and with my stories
transport us to another dimension
where all my insanity makes sense
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Re. crimsin in retrograde
6th May 2019 7:32pm
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6th May 2019 7:55pm
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6th May 2019 7:35pm
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Re: Re. crimsin in retrograde
6th May 2019 8:04pm
I take that as a high compliment beautiful Sky to me you are ever so lovely...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. crimsin in retrograde
6th May 2019 8:04pm
Wow -- this is an excellent explanation, Beautiful Sister
(with permission I'd like to share with my stepdaughter who is Bi-Polar)
Beautiful spill, Brenda
(with permission I'd like to share with my stepdaughter who is Bi-Polar)
Beautiful spill, Brenda
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Re: Re. crimsin in retrograde
6th May 2019 8:34pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen I would be honored for you to share with your daughter...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. crimsin in retrograde
6th May 2019 8:11pm
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6th May 2019 8:34pm
Re. crimsin in retrograde
6th May 2019 8:55pm
Re: Re. crimsin in retrograde
9th May 2019 5:51pm
Re. crimsin in retrograde
7th May 2019 1:25am
You're still the Queen
To so many of us
You reign
We throw petals at your feet
Believe it
To so many of us
You reign
We throw petals at your feet
Believe it
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Re: Re. crimsin in retrograde
9th May 2019 5:52pm
aw dearest Poet how you touch my heart... please forgive my tardy response I'm terribly behind on the site... I deeply appreciate all the love you show me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. crimsin in retrograde
7th May 2019 1:53am
Agree with Sky and Tallen. How powerfully and wonderfully rendered. Amazing and penetrating metaphors for living with bipolar. Bravo sweet poet. 😘💖
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Re: Re. crimsin in retrograde
9th May 2019 5:53pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for such a beautifully thoughtful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. crimsin in retrograde
8th May 2019 11:08pm
Entropy...butterflies are flapping their beautiful wings of chaos everywhere and everything is happening all at once in the eternal now. Love this poem Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. crimsin in retrograde
9th May 2019 5:54pm
Re. crimsin in retrograde
14th May 2019 5:27pm
This STAR is not dying out! Not Yet! Pulse away and let us bathe in your beauty!
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