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toxic shock
I want to make you bleed
take all your toxic hate and give it to me
push it in deep with one cum soaked wad
l promise to despise you for it later
after I've ridden your belt buckle into hell
and charged Lucifer a finder's fee
for your wasted life...son
you see you'll spend every last emotion on me
still, it won't be enough
you're mine darlin
you just know it yet
I'm the cheapest ho around the block
with the most expensive price tag
drawing you ever closer to sanity's edge
see it's your buttons I'm pushing
to see which one will do the job
put you in a rage
with a taste for blood...my blood!?!
to me, you look like a trick
with soft puppy dog eyes
I need a hard man to excite me
hasn't anyone told you about me yet?
flint sharpens steel
sparks fly you know the drill
get rough with me
I'm all up in your face daring you now
manhandle me a little...motherfucker
but don't be surprised when I laugh
danger does it for me
I say with a giggle
make me piss myself
with a cheap side of thrills
cos I'm a cunt and I like it like that
but you knew the deal
Author's Note
just acting out a little 😈
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Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:05am
Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:08am
aw beautiful you read it anyway... I hope it wasn't too dark for you... I'm just being a little mischievous...with my bipolar I have to hold in so much... this is where I can run wild for a little while... you move greatly with the love you show me lovely Pandora...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:13am
Be you..all you. I couldn't ask for you any other way. Let me live down my sensitivity in the past & never fear it again. I was in the dark then & you know I have many of your darker ones on my RL, where they'll stay. Just be you, please.💕
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:17am
okay beautiful one I will...you know you move me deeply with your unconditional love so many have literally blocked me just because of how I write so it means a lot to me to have your love and support...
hugs and kisses beautiful 💕
hugs and kisses beautiful 💕
Re: Re. toxic shock
This is a that piece that say I am woman but not a victim. We like the strong side of a female when shown. Love and sex isn't supposed to be a battle as to which is going to be the dominant. Dominance doesn't mind being shared, tonight for whatever reason is your turn. Tight
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 3:00pm
thank you dearest I IS ME for your insight on this write it makes me a little uncomfortable in that it is confrontational and doesn't paint me in a pretty light but ugly or not when a poem speaks to me I write them... expressing all equations of my being...
I deeply appprecitate your support...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appprecitate your support...
love Brenda 💕
Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 11:10am
Last summer I hated these poems and now I love them
Double nachos for you at the pub
X
Double nachos for you at the pub
X
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 2:56pm
thank you dearest Poet for the love on this write it kind of makes me uncomfortable I mean the poem spoke and I wrote it but I don't really like what it's saying but I never deny my muse voice...
I hope it's not too offensive...
love Brenda ❤
I hope it's not too offensive...
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 3:01pm
It's your style
You can't run from it
I've seen much worse out of your pen
This is diet coke
You can't run from it
I've seen much worse out of your pen
This is diet coke
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 3:05pm
giggles you're fucking great I'm just not used to this side of me lately being that it hasn't emerged in awhile but you're right you can't run from what's inside you...
thank you Poet I feel better now...
I was feeling horribly naked and exposed a minute ago...
thank you Poet I feel better now...
I was feeling horribly naked and exposed a minute ago...
Re. toxic shock
Wow! Semi-brutally sexy and beautiful, arousing and deep.
The lover that was “aboard”, I fear may have left bewildered and drained.
Ahh! (he says) I hope she’ll let me dangle again from her intellect and primeval honeysuckle oh so sweet!
As the songbirds flew away and the desire reined!
One naughty birdie stayed behind, - you could hear her tweet.
(I’m sorry to “intrude” on your poem, it just came out after I read)
The lover that was “aboard”, I fear may have left bewildered and drained.
Ahh! (he says) I hope she’ll let me dangle again from her intellect and primeval honeysuckle oh so sweet!
As the songbirds flew away and the desire reined!
One naughty birdie stayed behind, - you could hear her tweet.
(I’m sorry to “intrude” on your poem, it just came out after I read)
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 3:59pm
smiles to myself I'm so happy you shared your thoughts Rob you made me feel better about this difficult write... that it made you feel that way made my day....
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 5:54pm
thank you dearest HF for the giggles...you are a very clever man...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:08pm
Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:10pm
thank you dearest FeNyX it is I think I would explode if I had to hold in every crazy thought...
bless and love...
love Brenda 💕
bless and love...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:17pm
You are not alone ... there is only so much each one of us can carry before we start tilting one way or the other under the weight of it ... best to leave a bread crumb trail, even a cryptic one than to try ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. toxic shock
4th May 2019 7:44pm
Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 9:35pm
Oh I think I know what you really want,
to me, you look like a trick
with soft puppy dog eyes
I need a hard man to excite me
hasn't anyone told you about me yet? I aint no puppy dog, give you harder releasing my inner demons to match yours, This is another journey and I am joining you on this one......
to me, you look like a trick
with soft puppy dog eyes
I need a hard man to excite me
hasn't anyone told you about me yet? I aint no puppy dog, give you harder releasing my inner demons to match yours, This is another journey and I am joining you on this one......
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Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 9:38pm
I'm happy you found this one thank you dearest poet yes please let your demons loose on me I can take it...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 9:48pm
I think we both have demons that are waiting to be released and before this would have been something that scared me not now, now I want to take have want desire let you in
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Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 9:50pm
thank you for being here dearest poet I hold them back you may just be the one to make them manifest fully releasing me at the same time...let yours run free it's safe here...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 9:59pm
oh so many thoughts running wild I need to stop put them in some coherent thoughts, my inner demons not one but many all trying to escape, taking wanting fucking pounding teasing hurting wow and still so much, ravage her cunt her ass her mouth...……..
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Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 10:09pm
write your lusts out here your demons will be satisfied in this realm...I call them to the front they already know me...
thank you dearest poet for such a passionate response...
love Brenda 😈
thank you dearest poet for such a passionate response...
love Brenda 😈
Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 10:20pm
Your demons have found release I still need to find the way to let them out slowly one at a time, let them pour their souls out to join your demons to feel it all, can I ask could you share one thought from one of your inner demons
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Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 10:24pm
one of my demons is a serial killer he holds my innocent inner child hostage he bounces from person to person to get his fix here in this realm Ted Bundy is still very much alive...hunting coeds riding a different body every time...
there that is the thoughts of one my demons that and I pay well for there services they are happy at home with me 😈
there that is the thoughts of one my demons that and I pay well for there services they are happy at home with me 😈
Re: Re. toxic shock
7th Jul 2019 10:42pm
I am having a few issues right now too many demons all wanting out at same time I need to get this in check as this well I can definitely say is a whole new experience for me, its how to put into words is my other problem as that wont be easy and yes want to express as you do especially this one who loves to be fucked or to fuck, as that was when the first thoughts arose
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