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skydiving
my thoughts turn inward
and I am aware of my heart...
so foolishly reckless at times
sky diving with no thought of landing
it seems to have no care for its own happiness
easily lured in by some pretty words
it always fails to observe the sharp pointed teeth
of the one sweet talking to it
sharp and made to devour you, little girl,
didn't you know by now?
so guard yourself carefully in this land of men
your sparkle is what they're after
when you're tarnished and have lost your glow
they'll toss you aside and on to the next distraction
treat your man kindly
he's one of a kind
shaped especially with you in mind
souls don't unite everyday
bodies colliding is commonplace
in this world of lust
don't trade what's precious for a wink and a smile
above all remember he loves you
be careful after his heart if not for your own
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Re. skydiving
Anonymous
3rd May 2019 2:33pm
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Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:35pm
thank you beautiful Sky for feeling me so deeply I love my husband dearly I wouldn't want to live apart from him sometimes I forget...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:45pm
Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:48pm
This is beautifully written Brenda. Your wisdom is flowing in this poem.
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Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:51pm
thank you beautiful Summer I feel it is my spiritual guide talking to me...I much too foolish but perhaps I am just becoming more aware of the truth of things... I deeply appreciate your thoughts and insight dearest poetess...
love Brenda🌹
love Brenda🌹
Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:52pm
Precious things need extra-special protection - and continual rituals of unity.
"be careful after his heart if not for your own"
... when all else fails, remember the words of my mother: 'the way to a man's heart is through his stomach' :)))
"be careful after his heart if not for your own"
... when all else fails, remember the words of my mother: 'the way to a man's heart is through his stomach' :)))
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Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:54pm
smiles thank you Josh for your humor and words of wisdom...I deeply appreciate it...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 2:54pm
skydiving
3rd May 2019 4:02pm
More than a penny for your thoughts, Brenda!
They speak cyclonic wisdom to the tender heart. Your admonition is an anthem for the vulnerable:
"your sparkle is what they're after...
don't trade what's precious for a wink and a smile"
Your graphic looks like total commitment, against whose reckless strain you warn, but whose selfless giving you promote.
A beautiful concept.
cab
They speak cyclonic wisdom to the tender heart. Your admonition is an anthem for the vulnerable:
"your sparkle is what they're after...
don't trade what's precious for a wink and a smile"
Your graphic looks like total commitment, against whose reckless strain you warn, but whose selfless giving you promote.
A beautiful concept.
cab
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Re: skydiving
3rd May 2019 4:05pm
thank you graciously dearest Cab for your very insightful and thoughtful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
3rd May 2019 4:32pm
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Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 4:36pm
thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts your insight is appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 6:45pm
Heart, natural eloquence, gravitas, pain and bittersweet hope. Alchemy. 🙏
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Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 8:28pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel I'm deeply honored by the RL add and beautiful comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 9:18pm
Re: Re. skydiving
3rd May 2019 9:20pm
aw thank you dearest Tallen I couldn't have hoped for a better compliment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕