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Flicker
Candlelight flickering
Smell of your hair upon my face
Slow shadow dancers
Reveals our rhythmic pace
Music down and under
Floating hazy tune
Torn sheets of words unspoken
Litter mind’s afternoon
Golden rays of dawn creep in
Pushed behind by a new day
Fantasy becoming reality
No denying what’s left to say
I’m gonna leave you
Sweet withdrawal makes me sad
But take faith in this awakening
You’re the best damn dream I ever had
Smell of your hair upon my face
Slow shadow dancers
Reveals our rhythmic pace
Music down and under
Floating hazy tune
Torn sheets of words unspoken
Litter mind’s afternoon
Golden rays of dawn creep in
Pushed behind by a new day
Fantasy becoming reality
No denying what’s left to say
I’m gonna leave you
Sweet withdrawal makes me sad
But take faith in this awakening
You’re the best damn dream I ever had
Published 1st Dec 2011
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2011 8:03pm
love the title actually i love it all great job scorbra!
specially love this
"Music down and under
Floating hazy tune
Torn sheets of words unspoken"
specially love this
"Music down and under
Floating hazy tune
Torn sheets of words unspoken"
1st Dec 2011 9:19pm
Mememe,
Thank you for your comments. I have read many of yours as well. Like minds delve deep into similar fantasies. It's refreshing to get a woman's perspective.
Scorbra
Thank you for your comments. I have read many of yours as well. Like minds delve deep into similar fantasies. It's refreshing to get a woman's perspective.
Scorbra
24th Jun 2012 3:21pm
