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Phantasmagoria
I willingly fell
into the abyss
of
You.
Your outstretched
extremities
lay gently taut
and I made
Certain that
I made
contact
with You. . .
over and over
and over
again.
In my dreams
You are real
In reality
You are a
wisp of
love.
Published 1st May 2019
Author's Note
わたしは、あなたを愛しています
Watashi wa, anata o aishite imasu
Sky_dancer
Watashi wa, anata o aishite imasu
Sky_dancer
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Anonymous
1st May 2019 9:31am
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1st May 2019 3:07pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
1st May 2019 1:47pm
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1st May 2019 3:08pm
1st May 2019 5:54pm
Beautiful work Tallen. Your stanzas have an effortless flow. Love the second stanza in particular.
Daniel
Daniel
1st May 2019 8:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
1st May 2019 9:28pm
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1st May 2019 9:34pm
2nd May 2019 8:45pm
2nd May 2019 8:52pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
3rd May 2019 1:00pm
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3rd May 2019 5:31pm
very appreciative when i can
create beauty and You
feel it.
thank You for the kind praise
create beauty and You
feel it.
thank You for the kind praise
3rd May 2019 1:05pm
dearest Tallen I don't know how I missed this
so beautiful is your passion...
love Brenda 🌹
so beautiful is your passion...
love Brenda 🌹
3rd May 2019 5:32pm
Beautiful Brenda
You had other more pressing needs
appreciate You catching this
and sharing Your feel
thank You
You had other more pressing needs
appreciate You catching this
and sharing Your feel
thank You
3rd May 2019 5:44pm
3rd May 2019 5:47pm
appreciate the read
and wonderful share
**hands You a saucer of Blueberry Cheesecake**
and wonderful share
**hands You a saucer of Blueberry Cheesecake**
3rd May 2019 5:50pm
