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WELL EXAMINED POET
Am I simply a showman, raconteur,
writing to please an audience,
growing smaller by the day?
Or are my readers unintentional voyeurs?
Unable to avert their gaze.
My large, smudge ridden, soulfront window
provides a perfectly cloudy view.
A dimly lit surgeon’s theater
wherein my overexposed cerebrum
Is by myself poked and probed.
As in tandem I take fastidious notes.
Whether to stroke my vanity
Or maintain a modicum of sanity.
I just gotta write.
writing to please an audience,
growing smaller by the day?
Or are my readers unintentional voyeurs?
Unable to avert their gaze.
My large, smudge ridden, soulfront window
provides a perfectly cloudy view.
A dimly lit surgeon’s theater
wherein my overexposed cerebrum
Is by myself poked and probed.
As in tandem I take fastidious notes.
Whether to stroke my vanity
Or maintain a modicum of sanity.
I just gotta write.
Published 25th Apr 2019
Author's Note
NaPo/GloPoWriMo poem # 24.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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25th Apr 2019 00:19am
25th Apr 2019 00:43am
Merci beaucoup ma Jolie amie! Your poems are always a satisfying meal. I appreciate your kindness and serene, beautiful soul.
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25th Apr 2019 1:39pm
I am also glad you grace us with your words, and I don't give a rat's ass why you do it!! Just keep it up. :)
I personally write for both the reasons you mentioned - personal sanity and ego-stroking. I'd be lying if I said I don't crave the validation at least some of the time. So what?! If writing didn't feel good on some level, none of us would do it. We humans need stroking....
An excellent examination. I love the imagery in this.
I personally write for both the reasons you mentioned - personal sanity and ego-stroking. I'd be lying if I said I don't crave the validation at least some of the time. So what?! If writing didn't feel good on some level, none of us would do it. We humans need stroking....
An excellent examination. I love the imagery in this.
25th Apr 2019 5:18pm
Thank you, Titanium! You express so our similar motivations for writing. Validation really is important to me as well...somehow I've programmed to be somewhat ashamed for needing validation. I appreciate your clarity as well on this point. I am glad you like the piece.😁
25th Apr 2019 6:03pm
Seems to me we all suffer a ridiculous amount of shame for being human, especially in our individualistic culture.... we should really hold each other and ourselves with more grace.
25th Apr 2019 8:43pm
