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Appositional
Appositional
(Twenty-Four of 30 -- Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2019)
I still miss her
though we’ve never met.
So certain, so sure,
soon the universe will let
us touch one another
skin to skin we get
to vibrating in symbiotic
harmony.
Although-And-Yet,
we’ve never met
each other, we get;
I’ll wager a bet
the universe will let
us become a set
of Twin Flames
merging,
turning two
to one.
Yeah,
I still miss her
(she’s asleep
& 8 hrs ahead
of me)
though we’ve
not
yet
met.
#NaPoWriMo2019
77 words
56 unique
(Twenty-Four of 30 -- Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2019)
I still miss her
though we’ve never met.
So certain, so sure,
soon the universe will let
us touch one another
skin to skin we get
to vibrating in symbiotic
harmony.
Although-And-Yet,
we’ve never met
each other, we get;
I’ll wager a bet
the universe will let
us become a set
of Twin Flames
merging,
turning two
to one.
Yeah,
I still miss her
(she’s asleep
& 8 hrs ahead
of me)
though we’ve
not
yet
met.
#NaPoWriMo2019
77 words
56 unique
Published 24th Apr 2019
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24th Apr 2019 11:10am
8 hours - that's a long way. I hope love, courage and friendship triumph in the end.
24th Apr 2019 2:50pm
I am just too weird for people in my own country
i guess
me too,
i hope all those things prevail
thanx Brother
i guess
me too,
i hope all those things prevail
thanx Brother
Anonymous
24th Apr 2019 11:15am
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24th Apr 2019 9:01pm
24th Apr 2019 9:31pm
24th Apr 2019 9:58pm
24th Apr 2019 10:04pm
Pretty much
and will save a lot of pennies to not be apart
if even for only a promise
of one night
and will save a lot of pennies to not be apart
if even for only a promise
of one night
25th Apr 2019 3:46pm
This is fairy tale material. I live in fairy tales and will be writing soon about my tales. I can see why you were attracted and could not stop reading my long poem "My Redemption".
25th Apr 2019 6:44pm
aaaah this might be a Faerie Tale
but based on real life events.
thank You for stopping by the read and for the kind comments
Honored for the RL add
but based on real life events.
thank You for stopping by the read and for the kind comments
Honored for the RL add
25th Apr 2019 9:33pm
25th Apr 2019 9:40pm
Live the fairy spelling. I shall use it from now on with your permission of course. I would never take it as my own, giving due where dew is do. Trying to be funny, I am also kind of a jokester. Writing to the different poets in this manner is helping me, "I call it, learning to learn". Any way, very pleased to make your online acquaintance. Am sitting here laughing writing in a very wonderful site. I am emotional, feeling a bit, I don't know. Anyway, good evening. And thank you.
25th Apr 2019 9:49pm
Delighted to make Your acquaintance, as well
and use whatever You like.
It's gonna be like a Bazillion years before i see my
book published anyways.
and use whatever You like.
It's gonna be like a Bazillion years before i see my
book published anyways.
You just don't know. Thank you. I have a tendency to not read rules or owners manuals or the likef i have to matter if fact hear this "my motto is this: when all else fails read raw directions. So, if I do something stupid which are what I call the stupid s*** in life.is there anywhere to chat if there is where? Thanks again. Look forward to many more conversations.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
25th Apr 2019 7:27pm
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25th Apr 2019 7:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
25th Apr 2019 7:36pm
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Hey, Tallen
fate must be abusive
when sleep is elusive
because daylight becomes effusive
with thoughts that might be delusive
I'm probably wrong, but your persona seems to be
"(...sleep
& 8 hrs ahead
of [you])"!
That's the transposition I take away, in spite of more obvious narratives.
Now, the insistent alliterative "et" sound
[met/let/get
yet/met/get
bet/let/set
yet/met]
makes me start to fret
that I’ve turned your elusive pet
into mere sleep nugget.
Just having some fun with your eloquence.
Sincerely
cab
fate must be abusive
when sleep is elusive
because daylight becomes effusive
with thoughts that might be delusive
I'm probably wrong, but your persona seems to be
"(...sleep
& 8 hrs ahead
of [you])"!
That's the transposition I take away, in spite of more obvious narratives.
Now, the insistent alliterative "et" sound
[met/let/get
yet/met/get
bet/let/set
yet/met]
makes me start to fret
that I’ve turned your elusive pet
into mere sleep nugget.
Just having some fun with your eloquence.
Sincerely
cab
27th Apr 2019 2:30am
thank You Brother for causing me to smile -- i really need to at this very moment i am typing this
Sky lives in the UK and me in Southern Arizona and that is 5+K miles away and so,
Yeah, about 8hrs ahead of me.
Sky lives in the UK and me in Southern Arizona and that is 5+K miles away and so,
Yeah, about 8hrs ahead of me.
28th Apr 2019 4:07am
Thanks for the explanation, Tallen.
I honestly saw a metaphor of elusive sleep, which would naturally be 8 hours ahead of anyone who cannot seem to catch up.
Now I understand your intentions and your pain. Don't think I could manage the long-distance love.
cab
I honestly saw a metaphor of elusive sleep, which would naturally be 8 hours ahead of anyone who cannot seem to catch up.
Now I understand your intentions and your pain. Don't think I could manage the long-distance love.
cab
28th Apr 2019 4:13am
This is my 2nd LDR attempt with someone in the UK
and i am hoping i learned lessons from the previous one.
and i am hoping i learned lessons from the previous one.
28th Apr 2019 5:36am
My best to you. Amazing how a telling spark could melt the distance when the right time comes. Would you live in the UK?
Sincerely
cab
Sincerely
cab
28th Apr 2019 8:50am
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