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One More Beer
It’s getting pretty cold out here
On the outskirts of your love
Think I’ll have just one more beer
Though it never seems like enough
I wanted to just put you out
Out of my home and my heart
The battle has come to an end
But it seems like it’s about to start
I never even saw this coming
And I’m the one who led us here
Thought I’d fill the hole inside
Instead I’ll have one more beer
But you’re holding a shovel
I don’t know how to plug it
Yet this hole that I speak of
You are the one who dug it
I know the feelings come and go
And I shouldn’t even feel this way
You never earned that right from me
But I know that I’ll be okay someday
It looks like this is my last beer
The eighteen pack is already gone
How can you make the right choices
And still feel this damn wrong?
On the outskirts of your love
Think I’ll have just one more beer
Though it never seems like enough
I wanted to just put you out
Out of my home and my heart
The battle has come to an end
But it seems like it’s about to start
I never even saw this coming
And I’m the one who led us here
Thought I’d fill the hole inside
Instead I’ll have one more beer
But you’re holding a shovel
I don’t know how to plug it
Yet this hole that I speak of
You are the one who dug it
I know the feelings come and go
And I shouldn’t even feel this way
You never earned that right from me
But I know that I’ll be okay someday
It looks like this is my last beer
The eighteen pack is already gone
How can you make the right choices
And still feel this damn wrong?
Published 23rd Apr 2019
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23rd Apr 2019 10:24am
Sometimes you know you've made the right choice, simply because of how hard it is...but your heart will be at peace
Another amazing piece!
Another amazing piece!
23rd Apr 2019 11:17pm
I know, too big of a heart unfortunately. Thank you for the read, the comment and the love, StreetRabbit❤️
23rd Apr 2019 11:05am
23rd Apr 2019 11:18pm
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23rd Apr 2019 11:51am
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23rd Apr 2019 11:18pm
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23rd Apr 2019 11:20pm
Even when you’re winning logically, still feels like you’re losing when you lose something — argh. It that makes sense. Thank you for the read, the comment and the love❤️
23rd Apr 2019 3:40pm
Sometimes one can make no mistake yet still fail ... That is a harsh reality of life, sadly ... Epic write ... Bless and much love ...
23rd Apr 2019 11:21pm
That is so true, FeNyx. That’s how I feel. Thank you for the read, the comment and the love, as always❤️
23rd Apr 2019 7:19pm
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23rd Apr 2019 11:12pm
Sounds like love is fucking you up inside. But if you don't leave that beer alone a shovel will not be the only other thing that will be digging. I really enjoyed this poem.
23rd Apr 2019 11:22pm
Ah, being the stronger person is fucking me up inside. No worries, ;) been working on that 18 packs for days. Thank you for the read, the comment and the love, CasketSharpe❤️
