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Blind Fish
blind fish swimming wants an eye
swims far away from the other blind
from family, from familiar sea,
far away from how things must be
swims far away from the other blind
from family, from familiar sea,
far away from how things must be
Published 22nd Apr 2019
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for 4 line rhyme competition
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23rd Apr 2019 3:54am
This is both interesting and rhymes well. Contemplating the metaphor of the blind fish, swimming away from everything. The themes give clues. I hope you do well in the comp.
Daniel
Daniel
23rd Apr 2019 4:15am
Thank you! It's not one meant to be thought about too hard, just for the enjoyment of the rhythm and the image.
