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A Change Of Heart🔻
( 4-line rhymes )
🔻1🔻
A carrot is a root
That helps your eyes to see.
Tomato is a fruit,
So what does that make me?
🔸2🔸
A billy goat’s a boy
Who tends to eat and rut,
And if he gets annoyed
He’ll butt you in the gut.
🔹3🔹
A nanny goat’s a doe
Who gives milk to her kid.
She’ll chase you so you know
She saw what you just did.
🔻4🔻
Sebastian never liked
To hang around with girls.
On dates he’d go on strike,
His hair had longer curls.
🔸5🔸
A lion has his pride,
A tiger with her cubs.
A groom will kiss a bride
In spite of all the rubs.
🔹6🔹
The coward daily dies,
The brave one only once.
So there is no surprise
A cheat dies every month.
🔻7🔻
The saying always goes
A love for every heart,
But there’s a clause that shows
You’ve got to play it smart.
🔸8🔸
I have no enemies,
There are none in my eyes.
Because I’d rather tease,
And never to despise.
🔹9🔹
I didn’t always know
That this was the best way
In life, so I could show
My heart a lighter day.
NaPoGloPoWriMo 2019
🔻1🔻
A carrot is a root
That helps your eyes to see.
Tomato is a fruit,
So what does that make me?
🔸2🔸
A billy goat’s a boy
Who tends to eat and rut,
And if he gets annoyed
He’ll butt you in the gut.
🔹3🔹
A nanny goat’s a doe
Who gives milk to her kid.
She’ll chase you so you know
She saw what you just did.
🔻4🔻
Sebastian never liked
To hang around with girls.
On dates he’d go on strike,
His hair had longer curls.
🔸5🔸
A lion has his pride,
A tiger with her cubs.
A groom will kiss a bride
In spite of all the rubs.
🔹6🔹
The coward daily dies,
The brave one only once.
So there is no surprise
A cheat dies every month.
🔻7🔻
The saying always goes
A love for every heart,
But there’s a clause that shows
You’ve got to play it smart.
🔸8🔸
I have no enemies,
There are none in my eyes.
Because I’d rather tease,
And never to despise.
🔹9🔹
I didn’t always know
That this was the best way
In life, so I could show
My heart a lighter day.
NaPoGloPoWriMo 2019
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 17th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Day Seventeen of Thirty
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Re. A Change Of Heart
Anonymous
17th Apr 2019 1:11pm
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LOL! Thank you, Sky...
It’s 9 individual thoughts in rhyme that wound up drawing a life-changing conclusion in the end.😽<3
🐾rawr
It’s 9 individual thoughts in rhyme that wound up drawing a life-changing conclusion in the end.😽<3
🐾rawr
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17th Apr 2019 1:21pm
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17th Apr 2019 1:29pm
Re. A Change Of Heart
17th Apr 2019 1:29pm
WOW!!! ... Impressive write, got me ... all little bits lead to a lovely crescendo ... Bless and love ...
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17th Apr 2019 1:32pm
Re. A Change Of Heart
17th Apr 2019 1:43pm
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17th Apr 2019 1:51pm
Kimmyyyy! *pounces* Good morning! I’m glad you’re safe & warm!
And hey, how’d you know I was a swan before I morphed into a tiger?
🐾😽😸🐯
And hey, how’d you know I was a swan before I morphed into a tiger?
🐾😽😸🐯
Re. A Change Of Heart
17th Apr 2019 3:16pm
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17th Apr 2019 3:36pm
Yes indeed, my brother... bags of fun, and as I write on, it became thought-provoking. Who knew? Da muse knewz!
Jadey🐾🔻
Jadey🐾🔻
Re. A Change Of Heart
17th Apr 2019 9:32pm
This IS thought-provoking, and written in the light spirit you're known for.
Kathy
Kathy
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Re: Re. A Change Of Heart
17th Apr 2019 11:19pm
Really? I am? I mean - am I?😸LoL sorry I suddenly can’t help it... thanks for your lovely comment, Kathy!🙏🏻🌸
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Re. A Change Of Heart
18th Apr 2019 4:15am
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Yaaay, thank you, Sage! They were fun for me too, and I loved sharing them with you. I think the feather I must’ve swollowed is still lodged in my whassit, cause I’m about to post my Day 18 which I hope gives you a much-needed giggle this morning!😸
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18th Apr 2019 9:11am
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19th Apr 2019 4:08am
Thank you so much, dearest Celestial Sister, you got connected to the airways to the mirth in space!
says Tiger sista Jade🐾🔻
says Tiger sista Jade🐾🔻
Re. A Change Of Heart
19th Apr 2019 3:59am
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19th Apr 2019 4:04am
Oohh thank you, EmilyRose, for your words, and for the RL - smashing! I’m stoked! x
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19th Apr 2019 4:07am
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20th Apr 2019 2:43am
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20th Apr 2019 2:59am
Why thank you, brother, I’m the gift that keeps on giving, eh? Hee. I’m so glad you enjoy, and it’s a pleasure to meet you.😸