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Never Too Late
Night drifts along with dreams
and what it means
warm arms to hold
when thoughts run cold
and words just scratch and burn
there's a sparkle over there
sifting thru and finding near
a love real simple, and so clear
begging to comfort in the fright
and the fight
til the dawn of morning's light
I believe in a task at hand
for not the feint of heart
or the selfish
for unlike lust
you can always trust
love
silence can be deafening
tell them while you still can
and what it means
warm arms to hold
when thoughts run cold
and words just scratch and burn
there's a sparkle over there
sifting thru and finding near
a love real simple, and so clear
begging to comfort in the fright
and the fight
til the dawn of morning's light
I believe in a task at hand
for not the feint of heart
or the selfish
for unlike lust
you can always trust
love
silence can be deafening
tell them while you still can
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Re. Never Too Late
15th Apr 2019 1:30pm
This poem has a positive note and hopeful. I agree it is never too late.
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Re: Re. Never Too Late
15th Apr 2019 5:04pm
Re. Never Too Late
15th Apr 2019 1:57pm
Great poem. Its always better to talk to the ones you care about before its too late
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Re: Re. Never Too Late
15th Apr 2019 3:59pm
Re. Never Too Late
Anonymous
15th Apr 2019 2:40pm
Those last two lines carry a lot of weight. Silence can be a beautiful thing...unless it's weighted with what should be said.
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Re: Re. Never Too Late
15th Apr 2019 7:34pm
"Silence can be a beautiful thing...unless it's weighted with what should be said."
... that certainly hits the nail on the head.
... that certainly hits the nail on the head.
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Re. Never Too Late
16th Apr 2019 5:04am
Oh my word! That final couple set up by ' you can always trust love ' is magnificent, Tim!
Well done!
You're doing amazing!
Well done!
You're doing amazing!
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16th Apr 2019 12:23pm
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Re. Never Too Late
17th Apr 2019 2:37am