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notes of nature
grasses grow green in the meadow
roses thrive in midday hue
beauty so rich, so natural
as far as the blues can bloom
no nihilistic discord surrendered
amid adolescent accumulation
her love is real, is pure
captured in light, shaded in dark
steadfast and strong
not outdone or wrong
pictures filled with brimstone
shadowboxes lain outside the berm
consistentcy, of simplicity, true content
no hatred bred amongst impatiens
life she smells so so sweet
the sun sets on over my shoulder
your only look can be this way
roses thrive in midday hue
beauty so rich, so natural
as far as the blues can bloom
no nihilistic discord surrendered
amid adolescent accumulation
her love is real, is pure
captured in light, shaded in dark
steadfast and strong
not outdone or wrong
pictures filled with brimstone
shadowboxes lain outside the berm
consistentcy, of simplicity, true content
no hatred bred amongst impatiens
life she smells so so sweet
the sun sets on over my shoulder
your only look can be this way
Published 9th Apr 2019
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2019 2:16pm
Nature is the ultimate beauty...even in its brutality. A sigh-worthy poem, this
9th Apr 2019 4:59pm
9th Apr 2019 9:48pm
Always love your notes, JusTim. These lines move me, no doubt about it. Well done!
9th Apr 2019 9:50pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
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