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when we grieve
an octet
“Though I walk in the midst of trouble, You will revive me.” Ps. 138:7 (NASB)
peace
amidst
the pieces
dreams fragmented
by the storms of life
but the heart not bending
finds a place upon the rocks
whence by patience gently lending
healing streams the remnant mending
still the great disquietude
as the eagle molting
so the loss brings hope
like a puzzle
solved by time
when we
grieve
© Copyright 2019 April 07
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
“Though I walk in the midst of trouble, You will revive me.” Ps. 138:7 (NASB)
peace
amidst
the pieces
dreams fragmented
by the storms of life
but the heart not bending
finds a place upon the rocks
whence by patience gently lending
healing streams the remnant mending
still the great disquietude
as the eagle molting
so the loss brings hope
like a puzzle
solved by time
when we
grieve
© Copyright 2019 April 07
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 9th Apr 2019
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9th Apr 2019 2:19am
11th Apr 2019 7:45pm
Thank you, Ahavati. Great to know you enjoyed reading this piece.
Solid truth should provide solid freedom for those who believe the truth makes one free.
I appreciate your perspective.
Sincerely
cab
Solid truth should provide solid freedom for those who believe the truth makes one free.
I appreciate your perspective.
Sincerely
cab
9th Apr 2019 2:53am
11th Apr 2019 7:48pm
I'm happy for the concordant note this strikes for you, Grand. Wonderful of you to take the time to let me know you approve.
Blessings
cab
Blessings
cab
10th Apr 2019 5:05pm
Wow, I really love these lines!
"dreams fragmented
by the storms of life
but the heart not bending
finds a place upon the rocks"
I like your style, going to have to read more!
"dreams fragmented
by the storms of life
but the heart not bending
finds a place upon the rocks"
I like your style, going to have to read more!
11th Apr 2019 7:52pm
Thank you, TIG
I am deeply grateful for the positive affirmation, and the RL inclusion honours me.
May the sentiments prove encouraging to someone facing bewilderment or despair.
Sincerely
cab
I am deeply grateful for the positive affirmation, and the RL inclusion honours me.
May the sentiments prove encouraging to someone facing bewilderment or despair.
Sincerely
cab
