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Pissing on the Mona Lisa
the story starts with you typing away
pressing all the right keys as the world sleeps
thinking this is it, the crème de la crème
can’t stop now, must finish
“you lov’d me with a kiss of ink”
spilling those feels that were building
the wonders and pains of love seep
scribing all the ways you wish to be touched
suddenly the wind blows in a different direction
sending you off into a darker place of regret
“emptiness can take many forms”
your love has reached the end of the road
though the break of dawn has arrived
“sun begins to rise, shadows begin to hide”
such a sight fills you with many wonders
must go out and experience the cool breeze
as you start to type those keys again
one last line pops into your head
that one comes from a pure animalistic mind
“fuck me with all your grimy resentment”
finally done, you take a look to admire
realizing it hits too close to home
making up excuses for why it isn’t just perfect
then shedding a single tear before pressing delete
pressing all the right keys as the world sleeps
thinking this is it, the crème de la crème
can’t stop now, must finish
“you lov’d me with a kiss of ink”
spilling those feels that were building
the wonders and pains of love seep
scribing all the ways you wish to be touched
suddenly the wind blows in a different direction
sending you off into a darker place of regret
“emptiness can take many forms”
your love has reached the end of the road
though the break of dawn has arrived
“sun begins to rise, shadows begin to hide”
such a sight fills you with many wonders
must go out and experience the cool breeze
as you start to type those keys again
one last line pops into your head
that one comes from a pure animalistic mind
“fuck me with all your grimy resentment”
finally done, you take a look to admire
realizing it hits too close to home
making up excuses for why it isn’t just perfect
then shedding a single tear before pressing delete
Published 4th Apr 2019
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2019 7:45am
literally me this morning
dont mind me, I'm just here for the tippex ...
fuck me with your grimy resentment
... that's going to stick with me forever
bloody genius line... must resist plagiarizing it ltm
dont mind me, I'm just here for the tippex ...
fuck me with your grimy resentment
... that's going to stick with me forever
bloody genius line... must resist plagiarizing it ltm
5th Apr 2019 7:20am
That's an awesome compliment. You ever want to use that line it's all yours.
Many thanks for reading my poem 😁
Many thanks for reading my poem 😁
Anonymous
4th Apr 2019 8:13am
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5th Apr 2019 7:22am
Thank you so much. I'm glad it came out well. I look at some people's writing on here and it just blows my mind. Guess my style is more lyrical mixed with all different types of poetry.
4th Apr 2019 12:31pm
I love & feel this one, buddy. You know why & as always, you penned it in a way that's unique. It's funny while still having a very serious message. People lose life this way indeed.. I'm taking this one with me too!!
5th Apr 2019 7:26am
Many time a wasted. I know at least for me that feeling of reading something you wrote and enjoying it, it's such a fantastic feeling. Almost makes the wasted time worth it lol.
As always I smile to see your comments 😁
As always I smile to see your comments 😁
Anonymous
4th Apr 2019 12:49pm
Damn...I feel like you just invaded my reality. That muse is a real bitch sometimes...
5th Apr 2019 7:28am
It just may be all our reality. Chasing something in ourselves that we will never be satisfied with.
Thanks for reading my poem 😁
Thanks for reading my poem 😁
