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age
when we will age
or as they say
in time
when nature
will strip us both
of not only
our youth
but also
our flesh
bones
and our being
somewhere in the history of time
in some form
will live
this
memory
of loving
you
for me that
is defiance
of matter
as for my love for you
age
which is
youth by another name
as they say it matters
you tell me now
does it?
truly?
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
1st Apr 2019 12:24pm
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 12:55pm
welcome is the Poet Admired!
welcome
is the Friend! The Peer!
perhaps the blatantly obvious reason i have stayed here so long and don't feel like going anywhere else... is the company of souls here. Ones with heart, depth and insight!
beyond words bro
is my appreciation
welcome
is the Friend! The Peer!
perhaps the blatantly obvious reason i have stayed here so long and don't feel like going anywhere else... is the company of souls here. Ones with heart, depth and insight!
beyond words bro
is my appreciation
Re. age
1st Apr 2019 12:25pm
I don't really write of love anymore, not in it's swollen and heady form, it feels of my youth. This is gorgeous in how it drags me back, so thank you.
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 12:57pm
:-)
welcome
is the poet admired
welcome is the artist!
the swollen and heady form... enough said there! those words.
humbled by the appreciation is i
beyond words
the gratitude
welcome
is the poet admired
welcome is the artist!
the swollen and heady form... enough said there! those words.
humbled by the appreciation is i
beyond words
the gratitude
Re. age
1st Apr 2019 12:29pm
Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 12:58pm
welcome
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the Kind Friend!
you nailed it Tim. indeed it does... makes everyday worth looking forward to...
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the Kind Friend!
you nailed it Tim. indeed it does... makes everyday worth looking forward to...
Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 12:59pm
welcome dear Poetess!
humbled me by your appreciation....
gratitude
beyond words
humbled me by your appreciation....
gratitude
beyond words
Re. age
Anonymous
1st Apr 2019 1:06pm
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 1:08pm
Re. age
1st Apr 2019 1:20pm
What most people call age is just what happens to our bodies... but the important part is depth of insight gained through experience. Some people gain that depth more readily than others, so no - the number of years and the state of the body don't matter. And love transcends it all
Lovely, thoughtful poem. :)
Lovely, thoughtful poem. :)
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 2:46pm
:-)
welcome dear K!
also welcome is your depth of insight!
agree with you to the last letter.
Yes love transcends all. and yes...it IS the important part the depth o finsight gained through experience!
honored by your presence and insight!
welcome dear K!
also welcome is your depth of insight!
agree with you to the last letter.
Yes love transcends all. and yes...it IS the important part the depth o finsight gained through experience!
honored by your presence and insight!
Re. age
Anonymous
1st Apr 2019 2:03pm
I've never felt the numbers matter. It's what we do with the time allotted us. I like the way this moves :-)

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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 2:47pm
welcome dear Willows!
also welcome is your kind and generous feedback as well as your invaluable insight and views!!
appreciate all
immensely!
also welcome is your kind and generous feedback as well as your invaluable insight and views!!
appreciate all
immensely!
Re. age
No; it does not. Love is a vibration, not a number.
I have always agreed that the Life is the Blood. And the blood carries on and stirs when coming in contact with former loves and places evoking deja vu. The Life is the Blood which houses the Spirit - and history too.
Beautiful post, Cold One.
I have always agreed that the Life is the Blood. And the blood carries on and stirs when coming in contact with former loves and places evoking deja vu. The Life is the Blood which houses the Spirit - and history too.
Beautiful post, Cold One.
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 2:51pm
My Goodness!
you humble me to no end dear Sage One!
now i learn something new and am sent into the deeper end! thank You! Friend! Sage! One!
i often wondered about the deja vu... well yes blood houses the history...and the spirit...........
honored beyond words
dear Friend!
you humble me to no end dear Sage One!
now i learn something new and am sent into the deeper end! thank You! Friend! Sage! One!
i often wondered about the deja vu... well yes blood houses the history...and the spirit...........
honored beyond words
dear Friend!
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Apr 2019 3:45pm
1st Apr 2019 2:53pm
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 2:59pm
welcome
dear Friend firstly to the community that is DU
as well as to this scribble!
also welcome
is the keen insight and kind and generous appreciation
honored by the depth of attention
and insight
beyond words
my appreciation for all of the above
dear Friend firstly to the community that is DU
as well as to this scribble!
also welcome
is the keen insight and kind and generous appreciation
honored by the depth of attention
and insight
beyond words
my appreciation for all of the above
Re. age
1st Apr 2019 6:12pm
Kisses, sweet sisterly kisses, upon the brow of truly cherished kindred spirit, who never misses an opportunity to enlighten.
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Re: Re. age
1st Apr 2019 6:23pm
oh how you humble me Sis!
honored and humbled at once! i
today, in a discussion with another of our dear friend i mentioned this..
"i write what comes from the depths and i don't let it get diluted.. so my spills are raw..
see no other way
to spill and no other reason for self"
and that is just me... stating my reason for spilling ink... raw and as it comes..
it is another matter altogether the affection, the generosity, the kindness of the Friends and Siblings here... they see some sense some meaning in that one! Love You Sis and Love All friends here!
honored and humbled at once! i
today, in a discussion with another of our dear friend i mentioned this..
"i write what comes from the depths and i don't let it get diluted.. so my spills are raw..
see no other way
to spill and no other reason for self"
and that is just me... stating my reason for spilling ink... raw and as it comes..
it is another matter altogether the affection, the generosity, the kindness of the Friends and Siblings here... they see some sense some meaning in that one! Love You Sis and Love All friends here!
Re. age
1st Apr 2019 10:12pm
Re: Re. age
3rd Apr 2019 2:46pm
welcome dear Friend Harry!
you have humbled me to no end dear Artist/Philosopher!
way more than honored! Sir!
obliged, much obliged!
you have humbled me to no end dear Artist/Philosopher!
way more than honored! Sir!
obliged, much obliged!