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Hey Y'all revised
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my first spoken piece
Hey my name is Minxy
I hail from the South
once the Heart of Dixie
the place Lynard sings about
the weather here is whack we can't drive in the snow
but when it comes to football
we'll kick your ass you know
Summers here are HOT
with air that's hard to breathe
come on down and see us
we have air conditioners for relief
Y'all need to come hungry
we're always tryin' to feed
don't forget your Rolaids
everything's fried but the greens
then we'll bask in the heat
laying around the pool
forgetting all our troubles underneath the sky so blue
We're always fixin'to do something
that means in a minute please
no we dont marry brothers and yes, these are my teeth
I love watching football or playin it in the yard
going to NASCAR races drinkin' beer, partyin' hard
However I maintain refinement
My pearls around my neck
But when I get home
it's flip-flops and
sweet tea on the deck
consider this an invite
come on down any time
this poems getting lengthy
and I'm running out of rhymes
my first spoken piece
Hey my name is Minxy
I hail from the South
once the Heart of Dixie
the place Lynard sings about
the weather here is whack we can't drive in the snow
but when it comes to football
we'll kick your ass you know
Summers here are HOT
with air that's hard to breathe
come on down and see us
we have air conditioners for relief
Y'all need to come hungry
we're always tryin' to feed
don't forget your Rolaids
everything's fried but the greens
then we'll bask in the heat
laying around the pool
forgetting all our troubles underneath the sky so blue
We're always fixin'to do something
that means in a minute please
no we dont marry brothers and yes, these are my teeth
I love watching football or playin it in the yard
going to NASCAR races drinkin' beer, partyin' hard
However I maintain refinement
My pearls around my neck
But when I get home
it's flip-flops and
sweet tea on the deck
consider this an invite
come on down any time
this poems getting lengthy
and I'm running out of rhymes
Author's Note
Just for fun, Y'all!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Hey Y'all revised
You should send this to the Board of Tourism for consideration.
Cute write.
Cute write.
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Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 6:41pm
Thank you. I just got the spoken word clip attached. The whole motivation behind this was to step out of my box. I hate hearing my voice played back so this is difficult. But there it is... Minxy in the rough, lol
Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 7:09pm
I think you did a fine job on the reading, not at all rough, very sweet and true to your roots.
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Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 7:02pm
Awesome-sauce!! Great spoken word addition!!
You have a great playful spirit in your voice!
You should definitely do spoken word more often.
You have a great playful spirit in your voice!
You should definitely do spoken word more often.
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Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 7:05pm
Ugh, the southern accent takes away IQ points, lol.
I can do a southern girls mating call if you like?
I can do a southern girls mating call if you like?
Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 7:08pm
Yes. I need knowledge of the southern girl's mating call.
Got to sharpen my game somehow! Lol
Got to sharpen my game somehow! Lol
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31st Mar 2019 9:26pm
The mating call of a southern girl....."Y'All I'M DRUNK"
It's more effective if your hear it, and if she's drinkin tequila
It's more effective if your hear it, and if she's drinkin tequila
Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 10:25pm
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31st Mar 2019 8:03pm
Thank you lil dragon fly
*Minxy frolics after you tumbling and jumping in your wake
*Minxy frolics after you tumbling and jumping in your wake
Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 9:16pm
Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
That's what I'm doing right now. Watching the race at Texas. Love this track! Gives you a peak at what 'Dega might be like since it's also a restricter plate race. The new aero packages this year has thrown them a big learning curve, I mean the spoiler went from a little over 2" last year to almost 8"!! That's insane. Each track rides different so the first races have been so unpredictable.
Sorry, you said you'd come for NASCAR and the beer. So I got excited and couldn't help myself. Now, where's the beer? Lol
Sorry, you said you'd come for NASCAR and the beer. So I got excited and couldn't help myself. Now, where's the beer? Lol
Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
1st Apr 2019 1:45am
Yeah, tell me about the beer! It better be not watery nor light. Me, I adore quaffing it. Could you write as much as you wrote about the Nascar race describing it? I'm sure it's not just beer and that there is more to it.
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Re. Hey Y'all revised
Anonymous
31st Mar 2019 9:23pm
I loved it read and I love it even more spoken. It has a whole new meaning to it. I couldn't have ever imagined it so perfect. Your voice is very sweet and playful. I loved it.
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Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
31st Mar 2019 9:37pm
I am so glad you liked it. I am trying to step up and try new things. How else will I know what I like?
Minxy❣
Minxy❣
Re. Hey Y'all revised
2nd Apr 2019 6:37pm
Re. Hey Y'all revised
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2019 1:35pm
I'm pretty sold ;)
Enjoyed listening
Enjoyed listening
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Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
3rd Apr 2019 2:17pm
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Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
4th Apr 2019 5:35am
South? Like "Bless your heart!" ex-confederate south or Florida? Lol
Minxy's just joking!
Minxy's just joking!
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Re. Hey Y'all revised
5th Apr 2019 7:44pm
Hey!!! I also love NASCAR!!! Who is your favorite driver? And SEC football rules college and hard to beat the Falcons or the Saints in NFL. You sound like my kind of woman!
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Re: Re. Hey Y'all revised
23rd Jul 2019 7:29pm