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The Whisper Commands
The whisper
Is a beginning
A knowledge
Of your submissive soul
It commands
Wills your subjugation
Body trembles
Mind awash with images
That make you blush
Pride lost in the grasp of lust
Skin glistening with sweat
The whisper claims
It’s conquest
The body betrays a strong mind
Losing control
Weakened pleas give way
To wanton pleasure
As the whisper
Plunders what it now own
Is a beginning
A knowledge
Of your submissive soul
It commands
Wills your subjugation
Body trembles
Mind awash with images
That make you blush
Pride lost in the grasp of lust
Skin glistening with sweat
The whisper claims
It’s conquest
The body betrays a strong mind
Losing control
Weakened pleas give way
To wanton pleasure
As the whisper
Plunders what it now own
Published 31st Mar 2019
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31st Mar 2019 11:04am
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31st Mar 2019 11:40am
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31st Mar 2019 11:44am
Now I’m scared but I’m still laughing one of my favourite films from days gone by
31st Mar 2019 1:46pm
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
31st Mar 2019 1:52pm
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