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Angels Amongst Us
Tall grasses, sedges, and rushes
erupt across the meadow
there's a silhouette
off in the distance
her eyes hidden
as sun's got her back
riding within wind
swaying but still
amid approaching storms
visions revel in shelter
pureness of heart
raindrops are nourished
producing tomorrow's flowers
to be inhaled by all
halos aren't meant to be worn as crowns
erupt across the meadow
there's a silhouette
off in the distance
her eyes hidden
as sun's got her back
riding within wind
swaying but still
amid approaching storms
visions revel in shelter
pureness of heart
raindrops are nourished
producing tomorrow's flowers
to be inhaled by all
halos aren't meant to be worn as crowns
Published 24th Mar 2019
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24th Mar 2019 5:49pm
love the analogy ...
angelic ink, JTim
~Devlin
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24th Mar 2019 10:26pm
Great poem in its entirety, but I particularly admire that last line:
halos aren't meant to be worn as crowns
Excellent...
halos aren't meant to be worn as crowns
Excellent...
24th Mar 2019 11:25pm
Thanks my friend, blessed be the ones who offer their heart and soul without any expectations of return
25th Mar 2019 00:11am
25th Mar 2019 00:19am
Thank you dearest Brenda, I think it's truthful...there are many but it's nice to know a few personally
