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Undying Dreams
Uncertain,
I do what I can.
Try my best to understand.
May be my fate,
To know too late.
Undying dreams
hide in my heart,
burst inside...
blow wide apart.
If I just do,
What I must do.
What makes me... me.
Won't set me free.
Heavy shoulders hang low,
Falling further I go.
Say I'm saying too much,
Think my thoughts then tell me such.
Hard not to mind...
This life will unwind.
Ain't all daisies and rainbows,
Carrying my sorrows.
Borrow ways I can...
To be a man.
Still crying,
dreams undying!
I do what I can.
Try my best to understand.
May be my fate,
To know too late.
Undying dreams
hide in my heart,
burst inside...
blow wide apart.
If I just do,
What I must do.
What makes me... me.
Won't set me free.
Heavy shoulders hang low,
Falling further I go.
Say I'm saying too much,
Think my thoughts then tell me such.
Hard not to mind...
This life will unwind.
Ain't all daisies and rainbows,
Carrying my sorrows.
Borrow ways I can...
To be a man.
Still crying,
dreams undying!
Published 22nd Mar 2019
| Edited 20th Jul 2023
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22nd Mar 2019 4:12pm
Responsibilities always capture our dreams
and we must respond in kind
it becomes a struggle and struggle to hang
on to the dreams.
welcome to the Deep (end of the pool)
and we must respond in kind
it becomes a struggle and struggle to hang
on to the dreams.
welcome to the Deep (end of the pool)
23rd Mar 2019 5:10am
In my case, perhaps the struggle is long gone, but a dream remains in it's place, as simply a dream.
22nd Mar 2019 4:41pm
Great piece! Enjoyed this
Especially loved the ending lines
"Ain't all daisies and rainbows,
Carrying my sorrows.
Borrow ways I can...
To be a man.
Still crying,
dreams undying!"
Well written and deeply resonating content
Great penning!
Especially loved the ending lines
"Ain't all daisies and rainbows,
Carrying my sorrows.
Borrow ways I can...
To be a man.
Still crying,
dreams undying!"
Well written and deeply resonating content
Great penning!
23rd Mar 2019 5:12am
