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Breathe
The touch of your skin's so smooth
as I listen to the words falling thru the rain
each one a note
waiting on an echo
a soft voice soothes
as the winds begin to blow
hair covers your eyes
but you're not here to see
wrapped up in silence and comfort
life begins to breathe
as I listen to the words falling thru the rain
each one a note
waiting on an echo
a soft voice soothes
as the winds begin to blow
hair covers your eyes
but you're not here to see
wrapped up in silence and comfort
life begins to breathe
Published 22nd Mar 2019
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22nd Mar 2019 5:00pm
Marvelous piece m8 absolutely love this
"wrapped up in silence and comfort
life begins to breathe "
So succinctly serene
Splendid spill Tim👏👏
"wrapped up in silence and comfort
life begins to breathe "
So succinctly serene
Splendid spill Tim👏👏
22nd Mar 2019 6:46pm
22nd Mar 2019 6:49pm
A refreshing love poem, JusTim. "Wrapped up in silence and comfort." What a great line, like all the rest.
22nd Mar 2019 6:51pm
22nd Mar 2019 6:59pm
22nd Mar 2019 7:00pm
22nd Mar 2019 7:34pm
Absolutely beautiful, Tim!!♡
"each one a note
waiting on an echo" ...says it all;)
"each one a note
waiting on an echo" ...says it all;)
