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Clandestine
Clandestine
Pervasive thoughts
Halting to my every urge
Like a sweet wine
unto my throat
Your taste awakens
my every thoughts
The rhapsody
of bodies entwined
In the velvety sheets
that was left undone
penetrate my depth
With all your might
But remember . . .
i like it rough
(C)mai3.18.19
Pervasive thoughts
Halting to my every urge
Like a sweet wine
unto my throat
Your taste awakens
my every thoughts
The rhapsody
of bodies entwined
In the velvety sheets
that was left undone
penetrate my depth
With all your might
But remember . . .
i like it rough
(C)mai3.18.19
Published 18th Mar 2019
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18th Mar 2019 12:52pm
18th Mar 2019 12:55pm
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19th Mar 2019 11:56am
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19th Mar 2019 1:14pm
Hot, certainly plays to the imagination of the person addressed. Favourite lines:
Like a sweet wine
unto my throat
Your taste awakens
my every thoughts [flattering!]
The rhapsody
of bodies entwined
In the velvety sheets
Like a sweet wine
unto my throat
Your taste awakens
my every thoughts [flattering!]
The rhapsody
of bodies entwined
In the velvety sheets
24th Jun 2019 7:09am
24th Jun 2019 10:44pm
Your erotic poems could easily be read as whispers into a man's ear, Yes, they do arouse if one thinks or reads deeply into them. (Or perhaps it's just the sensuality of my own imagination.)
25th Jun 2019 00:59am
You just made my monday morning. Thanks so much for making me smike this early. 😍 imagination. . . Sensuality of a lucid imagination. 😊
