Strobe

sensual and beautiful

A gracious thank you, DC.

Jade🥀

Thank you, dear Em, I’ve missed you.

Jade🥀

This is beautiful...the old school sensuality captured me most.🌹

You damn poets with the ability to keep it under 50 syllables to a verse make me green with envy.😅

Why thank you, my dear sister from another mister.😚

I’ve always adored writing old school sensuality. And when I read where you said that, I sqweeee’d, I admit!  xo

Jadey🥀

You're most welcome! Keep them coming & we can sqweeee away together..*giggles*
...they're my favorite, but my gift hasn't came quite yet for me...

I understand, love.  

I’ve been doing this since I was a kid ( no formal training either though some believed otherwise till I set the record straight...), learning over the years by observing, trial & error, inquiring, and practice practice practice.

In fact, it’s ironic; because I started out as a trad artist ( also with no formal training ), then later, wrote my first poem. The irony? I always represented those who have the passion, just not the professional guidance, yet I kept going and now - especially during my current tenure here at DU - many assume I’m part of the literary establishment.  

Well, I guess I am by comparison, but at heart ( and this is the deal-breaker ), I’m still and always will be the humble barefoot interloper/ outsider who never forgets what it’s like for the novice... with the passion.

I got this one on my write.;) Thank you ever so much! You're a dear.😘

Lovely ... Bless and love ..

Thank you, Fenyx.


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The Celestial One, has plucked diamonds birthed from star beds, and placed them as a continuous string that she weaves through my hair.

So are your words, dear Sister!

Your ever seeking sister  
Jade Tiger🥀

Truly beautiful piece I love this! So sensually serene👏👏
So creatively composed!

Thank you so much, dear Hunter, for such honor as your words bestow.

Jade🥀

Jadey, I read your lengthy reply above, the short bio, and was fascinated.  The poem, too, is enthralling.  Excellent...

Gosh, thank you my dear friend. I’m so glad you like this piece, it’s kind of special to me. And thanks even for reading the impromptu bio blurb moment I had.

My love to you and dear Ninja. x x

Jadey🥀

Hi, Jade🥀

This is a beautiful piece.  I feel as though I've read it before (perhaps in another DU forum).

Of significant appeal to me is the transposition of the chorus (A) line through all positions of the successive quatrains -- a kind of universal searchlight that comprehends and controls everything.  Only coincidentally am I discovering that that is the character of the  quatern!  It reminds me of ternary form in music, in which successive episodes are alternated with a fixed idea, thus: ABACABA, etc.

When I try my first quatern (soon),  I'll ask your opinion on whether I'm on track.

Thank you so much, dear amazing Poet, for sharing your thoughts, and for the honor of place on your RL. And...

I look forward to when you’re ready to have me look over your first Quatern. Just message me ahead of time and I’ll give you my email addy.

Jade🥀

Well hello there, Danny? Danny! It’s you with a lovely new avatar image!  
 
So nice to have you stop by, dear; it looks like life is good.  
   
I’m pleased at your enjoyment of my budding write, thank you for sharing. And let’s not be strangers.  
   
Jade🥀