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Loopy
Life
is straight up
LOOPY as fuck.
Anyone else feel stuck?
Shit out of luck?
Mind running amuck?
It's like
GO! GO! GO!
We never stop
Or slow down
we're always on the run
never having fun..
no longer astonished
by the sun..
What have we done?
I feel gone...
Long gone..
Getting less lonely though,
I can see
I'm not the only one who feels this way
on any given day.
Who's to say
how we should behave
or feel or not feel..
Does anyone know what's "real"?
is straight up
LOOPY as fuck.
Anyone else feel stuck?
Shit out of luck?
Mind running amuck?
It's like
GO! GO! GO!
We never stop
Or slow down
we're always on the run
never having fun..
no longer astonished
by the sun..
What have we done?
I feel gone...
Long gone..
Getting less lonely though,
I can see
I'm not the only one who feels this way
on any given day.
Who's to say
how we should behave
or feel or not feel..
Does anyone know what's "real"?
Published 16th Mar 2019
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16th Mar 2019 3:03pm
16th Mar 2019 3:27pm
16th Mar 2019 3:04pm
I love this! I wish I could clink my bowl to yours right now! Excellent, excellent ink. And so very true, I love it.
16th Mar 2019 3:28pm
Haha! Thanks so much Liv!🙏
Appreciate your lovely and kind words
Glad you liked!
Appreciate your lovely and kind words
Glad you liked!
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16th Mar 2019 10:06pm
17th Mar 2019 6:09pm
Living in the moment helps to define reality, Hunter.
I very much enjoyed the succinct form of this.
I very much enjoyed the succinct form of this.
18th Mar 2019 11:38pm
I agree Ahavati!
That's the truth
Appreciate your kind wise words as always! Thanks so much🙏
That's the truth
Appreciate your kind wise words as always! Thanks so much🙏
18th Mar 2019 6:09pm
This is so unbelievably true. It seems like life is all about getting ahead and for what, honestly? It's like people work towards succeeding at a job that makes them miserable so they can have a nice car, a big house, etc., but where does that get you in the grand scheme of things? I think everyone, myself included, need to remember the little things in life and to take a deep breath once in a while, haha, this poem got me thinking so thank you!
18th Mar 2019 11:42pm
Thanks for this great comment!
Yea it doesn't really make sense to me that type of life..
I always come back to this question,
"where does that get you in the grand scheme of things?"
Living in a society like this is suffocating and straight up annoying
Thanks so much for your feedback
Much appreciation!
Yea it doesn't really make sense to me that type of life..
I always come back to this question,
"where does that get you in the grand scheme of things?"
Living in a society like this is suffocating and straight up annoying
Thanks so much for your feedback
Much appreciation!
