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Spectral
An echo sounding down the hall
I listen, and hear the call
Her sweet tones lull, reverberate
So gently when the hour grows late
Her spectral fingers drift my hair
A comfort from the fear and care
Yet she died by her own hand
A departure fully planned
But it seems she was not damned
Cast in Hell at God's demand
Her love survives, or so I pray
And she, my sister, may well stay.
I listen, and hear the call
Her sweet tones lull, reverberate
So gently when the hour grows late
Her spectral fingers drift my hair
A comfort from the fear and care
Yet she died by her own hand
A departure fully planned
But it seems she was not damned
Cast in Hell at God's demand
Her love survives, or so I pray
And she, my sister, may well stay.
Author's Note
Photo: "The Brown Lady," possibly the most highly regarded ghost photo ever taken.
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13th Mar 2019 9:05pm
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13th Mar 2019 9:25pm
You're right, JusTim. I still feel her near me, a reassurance, if only a drifting touch. Do I believe in ghosts? Absolutely. Thank you!
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13th Mar 2019 9:28pm
I'm glad this works for you, Renaissance. I had some misgivings about the use of my usual rhythm and rhyme. I didn't want to trivialize a melancholy subject that lingers. Thank you!
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13th Mar 2019 9:51pm
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13th Mar 2019 9:54pm
So am I. I do believe that some ghosts are lost souls. This one knows her way. Thank you!
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13th Mar 2019 9:56pm
Are we truly lost, in life and death? Now you got me started Crow! <3
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 10:23pm
Heaven, purgatory and hell are not places but dimensions. I believe that there is a constant interaction (visible or invisible, felt or not) between them and us. This is beautiful my friend. You confirm that life is eternal. No matter what their state of being. I too believe. J
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13th Mar 2019 10:39pm
Very well said, J. You write some of the best comments I've ever read here. I like your idea about dimensions, and it may very well be true. Thank you!
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 10:43pm
I actually believe this. Nothing is lost if not what is deemed lost by itself. I hope it makes sense.
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2019 00:00am
Crow.. lost souls equals poe.. divine ink.. well penned.. many a man, searching for.. Annabel Lee.. no joke in the music field it's abundant.. you made me realize the search, for the perfect ballad.. it's her.. mad respect..
Dave
Dave
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15th Mar 2019 1:12am
I think "Annabel Lee" is one of Poe's best. Thank you for the respect. You certainly have mine.
Re. Spectral
14th Mar 2019 1:05am
Beautiful, tender write. I don't think your rhyme trivializes it at all. To me it gives it a lovely musical feel, helps hold it all together.
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15th Mar 2019 1:14am
Thank you, brokentitanium. I'm glad you feel that way about the rhyme. Very reassuring.
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14th Mar 2019 3:43am
I believe, Crowfly. I'm so sorry suicide has happened in your family too. Death is never easy but to know they were that saddened is haunting. She's free now though, no pain..no sadness.🖤
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15th Mar 2019 1:19am
She is now a free soul, I agree. She lived a decent and very accomplished life. That should be her salvation. She is still with me, psychologically and spiritually. Thank you Pandora!
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14th Mar 2019 10:19pm
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15th Mar 2019 10:04pm
beautiful dearest Thomas their love stays with us
and I firmly believe she is fine and loved in heaven...
love Brenda ❤
and I firmly believe she is fine and loved in heaven...
love Brenda ❤
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