Dead in the Water

I have an image of an ominous figure on the shore, as someone drowns, spooky. Nice write

Precisely, thank you for the comment :)

Another great write I like this

Thanks so much :)

Thanks so much for the read :)

Chilling and sad, ye theres more...Nice. <3

Thanks so much for the read!

Powerful. Disturbing. Delicious.

I love all three! Thank you for the read, KillHope :)

Been there ... Great expressing of it ... Bless and love ..

Thanks for the reads, FeNyX, your comments and words always put a smile on my face.

Happy to make one smile ... Bless and love ... ..

Laying there drifting free
Was that the gift you gave me?

lol I couldn't resist but your rhyming narrative is one of my favourites.Awesome Liv;)

Oh I love those lines! Why didn’t I think of that haha, yes I’ve noticed ours are somewhat similar :) thanks always for the reads, Sweet_Psycho!

This is great, especially the rhythm and the twist in the middle!

Why thank you, Welcome to the underground :)

Wow...I felt this

Aww thank you so much for the read, and the comment! Kudos, my friend❤️

Loved this one! I'm adding it as my first favorite, which is what the "reading list" is for, right?

I also wanted to mention that I can feel the tension in the relationship and I actually pictured the drowning to be a reoccuring problem even though you didn't mention it in your poem. I thought in my head "Just like before, I'm dead in the water"

Ah thank you for that! Yes, my old boyfriend often left me dead in the water. “Yet still I look for you.” Im glad someone saw that, thanks for reading :)

I like this very much, it's also a very vulnerable piece, hope your well

Thanks, luv! I appreciate the kindness❤️