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Just Me
Wilted flower
Symbol of me
Signs of forever
in sweet love's quest..
Illusions
through broken glasses
a thousand reflections
of heart broken
and me
Symbol of me
Signs of forever
in sweet love's quest..
Illusions
through broken glasses
a thousand reflections
of heart broken
and me
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23rd Nov 2011 1:10pm
Your Poetry
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2011 1:23pm
Is getting more and more interesting with every post. I am finding I love the newer writes more than the older ones.
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re: Your Poetry
24th Nov 2011 1:21am
AliP dear, practise makes perfect. The first few instalments, exorcising demons...after that love and lust and then...another level. Great right? Thank you for commenting.
re: ummm
24th Nov 2011 1:23am
Oh yes dear Pixxel. Sometimes it can be confusing. Thats an aspiring poet's chaotic thoughts. Thanks for the comment.
I adore this :)
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24th Nov 2011 11:00am
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re: I adore this :)
24th Nov 2011 12:27pm
Thank you Gabriel. That's so kind of you, angel...wouldst thou soar with me...? Sorry, so tempted to say that. lol!
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24th Nov 2011 4:25pm
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24th Nov 2011 10:46pm
Just Me
25th Nov 2011 00:14am
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25th Nov 2011 00:22am
Very good words
1st Dec 2011 3:22am
re: Very good words
1st Dec 2011 4:28am