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More than Pain
I feel broken and unfixable
I feel desperate to be free
Fighting my own existence,
that takes me to a place of broken dreams.
Robbed of my dreams, in a box of despair.
My body won't heal and my soul is broken with no repair.
No easy way out, no solution as I age.
This is the life that I am living,
with no happy ending, just pain.
I feel desperate to be free
Fighting my own existence,
that takes me to a place of broken dreams.
Robbed of my dreams, in a box of despair.
My body won't heal and my soul is broken with no repair.
No easy way out, no solution as I age.
This is the life that I am living,
with no happy ending, just pain.
Published 12th Mar 2019
Author's Note
This poem is about dealing with a painful illness and the toll it takes in your life. Not only the physical aspect of the pain but how much it takes away from you and the hopelessness we feel when there is no solution in sight.
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13th Mar 2019 8:02am
Welcome to the Underground!! I've just recently started posting about my own illness, probably the first couple pages so I identify a lot. I hope you find DUP cathartic & refreshing!!
13th Mar 2019 11:34am
Great piece! Extremely relatable
very much reminded me of my parents who live life in pretty much constant physical pain and as you so perfectly put it "how much it takes away from you and the hopelessness we feel when there is no solution in sight."
Yup this is the feeling I feel radiating off my parents i literally get anxiety just thinking about the pain they're dealing with and how bad they feel
Great piece touched my soul👏👏
very much reminded me of my parents who live life in pretty much constant physical pain and as you so perfectly put it "how much it takes away from you and the hopelessness we feel when there is no solution in sight."
Yup this is the feeling I feel radiating off my parents i literally get anxiety just thinking about the pain they're dealing with and how bad they feel
Great piece touched my soul👏👏
14th Mar 2019 10:32am
Great write and I empathize as dealing with pain can be both demotivating and demoralising. Anyone with Fybromyalgia, Heart Failure, Multiple Sclerosis, Cancer and various other life limiting conditions can and do feel that sense of helplessness and hopelessness. I feel the emotion in your ink. Best wishes. David
15th Mar 2019 1:19pm
20th Mar 2019 7:21pm
Very relatable and well said. To finding a "First Aid" station that fixes us up.
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
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