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On His 20th Month
Fearful of father,
crawls under bed covers, nests
up mother's belly...
crawls under bed covers, nests
up mother's belly...
Published 12th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Entry for Memory Haiku comp.
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12th Mar 2019 5:53pm
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12th Mar 2019 10:22pm
my cat acts like that
tummy-snuggler plastered to my side
like a limpet...
thank you Tak...for the good write...
delightul piece of brevity...
you seem to have an affinity...for senryu ...Ely
tummy-snuggler plastered to my side
like a limpet...
thank you Tak...for the good write...
delightul piece of brevity...
you seem to have an affinity...for senryu ...Ely
12th Mar 2019 11:44pm
To be honest, my first contact with the Haiku form, was here in DUP about a year ago. Since then I've been experimenting a lot with it and in many ways it fits my propensity towards an austere form of poetry that , also, allows for expressing complex themes.
Thank you so much for commenting!
Thank you so much for commenting!
